|3 Jul 2006|| Incoming freshmen|
There's so much of a story in this picture. Beautiful.
|16 Aug 2006|| Anime Freak|
You must have patience to give so much time in detailing this picture. Wow... You can feel the excitment and suspense here. keep it up!
|5 Oct 2006|| Anonymous|
awesome job! the storie sounds cool- what is the "legend of elu"? I can't seem to find it anywhere....
|18 Nov 2006|| Anonymous|
Who said this was anime? Really, it's not. There is nothing classic anime about it.
I like this pic, the expression is great the only critque that I have is how the girl holds the sword. What is described is an angry fight. The grips on the swords looks too casual and loose, and it makes it so that the expression (once again great) looks unjustified.
Other than that bravo
|22 Nov 2006|| Unicorn|
Congrats on Mods! So, why are they fighting? She sounds mad! Great pic, though, I love it!
|31 Dec 2006|| Robynne|
-Elu's right leg is set slightly off [perhaps the knee could be pointed more to the right of the page]
-I haven't read your story, so I dunno if the green shoes serve a purpose but... they seem ridiculous.
~I like the choice that your protagonist would be facing away from the angle chosen... it strikes of a pleasing confidence in Elu and that's nice to see of an artist.
~I'm impressed with Elu's hair- it's mobile due to the tussle and I'm glad that you've shown it.
~Previous reviewers' comments about the defender's expressoin and the fencing stance [authentic- nice to see]
Overall, I am envious. This is very well drawn and coloured for a lovely effect as a whole. (Also, I find that the trees are strange but they just seem to *fit*. I can't be any more eloquent, sorry.
Anyhow, this piece had effectively heightened my curiousity towards your story. Well done, Ludi.
|18 Jan 2007|| Anonymous|
I wonder what he did 2 really tick her off...
|18 Jan 2007|| Dragonsluver|
Hey, cool pic. I like how you drew them in the right positions for swordplay. I'm in fencing and thought that was pretty cool. A desevred mods choice to be sure.
|24 Aug 2007|| Aaron|
Wow, nice picture. I like it a lot, and I can feel the emotion coming out. It's nice, though for future instruction on blade fights, the lunge position of the attacker should be coupled with a pointed blade--the sideways thrust wouldn't do anything. However, I LOVE the defender's position and the way he has a shocked look on his face. BEAUTIFUL work! Thank you much for sharing!
|24 Nov 2008|| Sherri L. White|
Love to see girls giving as good as they get !!! ( sorry guys )....cool pic !!!