| 13 Mar 2003 |  Matthew T. Summers | | |
| 5 Jun 2003 |  Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich | | |
| 27 Dec 2003 |  THE Critic | Ok. I simply must do this, and everyone's going to hate me, but I don't really care. You seem to believe that your writing skills surpass those of a grown man, though I think they could hardly beat those of a five year old. It's embarrassing how much you carry on about how significant your writing skills are, when your spelling is pathetic and rhyming skills nonexistent. Spare yourself the shame and stop preening - there is nothing here to be immensely proud of.   Gabriella Grace Christensen replies: "Well first of all, no ones going to hate you. And second of all I see no reason for you to be bashing in the manner that you are. I suppose that I bosted, but only repeting in what was said to my by teachers and other critics that critique better then you. And considering 5 year old can hardly fathom what were talking about right now, I think you were exagerating just a bit. And I think I do have something to be proud of because I did actualy used to have the writing skills of a 5 year old, but that has changed immensily. I think that you should stop going around bringing peoples spirits down just because you don't have anyone that loves you and thinks that your good and anything. Save the pity and lothing for yourself. Thankyou goodnight. " | |
| 27 Dec 2003 |  Hannah 'Boojy thuh Goff' Sauer | Hey, I really enjoyed what you've got up here. Definitely the start of something great. I too am a terror for typos, I never notice them until its too late. Nehoos, I look forward to your next update! *confettis* keep it up!
Booj | |
| 27 Dec 2003 |  Lacey Wright | As said above, congrats on being featured author...yup. Your story is great and your poems are fantastic! I wish I could write poetry like that! Unfortunately, my writing is pretty much limited to prose. I have one suggestion, although I don't know how you feel about constructive criticism. You might try getting one of your friends or your mother to edit the story for you so there aren't so many grammatical or spelling errors. If I offended you by saying this, consider all that typing space as silence or endless adoration.  You're a great writer! Keep at it! | |
| 27 Dec 2003 |  ´Disco´ Vic Alfieri | Firstly congrats on being featured member for the 27 of the 12th 2003 and also your poems rock, have you got any more? The imagery in them is fascinating, and leaves you wanting more.....If you have more poems i reckon you should post some up here, you certainly have a gift.  Gabriella Grace Christensen replies: "Thank you. I didn't know I was featured untill I checked this out. Being sick keeps you out of touch alot. Thank you though so much. " | |
| 28 Dec 2003 |  Alexandra Calesta Maccabee | Hello Gabriella! I must say, your writing is beautiful. Keep writing!! And congradulations on being featured member!!  Gabriella Grace Christensen replies: "Thankyou so much!" | |
