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Thiago Macek G. Zahn

"Caged Dreams" by Thiago Macek G. Zahn

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This is a kind of lamentation for the loss of the magic in the world, with some final words of hope for its return.
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Through the mansion´s halls,
coming is the nightfall.
Snow in the windows,
Scarlet natural kaleidoscope
Covering the wilderness,
Blurring the sky;
Freezing the heart.

Behind this glass mountain,
ain´t there anything else?
Trespassing the smoke curtains
Banality binds your soul;
Bane your Fae, but still
It´s not the end.

The change of seasons
will come in time.
For all, its aid,
for us, its hope.
Then thoughts can be
seen once more,
wandering in other
untrodden paths.
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18 Jan 2009:-) Hillary Kent
Hello there, you dropped some comments on my page so I thought I would stop by and return the favor. 2 I really like this poem...very dreamy, very sad. I especially liked the last verse; it read very will and I liked the anticipation of slow change...nicely done!
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About 'Caged Dreams':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Thiago Macek G. Zahn
 • Copyright: ©Thiago Macek G. Zahn. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Dreams, Seasons, Faeries, Magic, Hope
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Faery, Fay, Faeries
 • Views: 389


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