| 5 Apr 2001 |  Aury | I like your prologue, you really ought to finish it! | |
| 24 Apr 2001 | Becca Fusher (in broad daylight) | Is this still not showing up on my computer? Yiksers! Hey Maddie! How are you with your stories today? Well, I think you're doing very well!  (like I said in my last comment 'keep up the good work') | |
| 20 May 2001 | Becca | K. I wanted to say this where the least amount of people go and I suppose it is here. Why are you blocking my E-Mails? | |
| 27 Jan 2002 | Kobain28 | Hey the story was great, I really love your writing, the ending is very suspensful. It really gets you thinking about what happens next. | |
| 23 Feb 2002 | josh | You are a beautiful person, both on the inside and on the outside. Even though I can't say that I know you, I feel that your art is an outer expression on who you are, and it is truly a wonderful thing. | |
| 13 Jul 2002 | Jayden Joyce | Damn you, pretty and smart!! How can one compete! Your writing ability easily matches your drawing ability and are equally amazing. I still cant work out how to get all these images from my head into words on paper, you have a gift, use it well. | |
| 26 Jan 2003 |  Catherine 'Irikchitine' Johnson | Hey! you really have to finish the story, i'm hooked. i can see a lot of influences from Robert Jordan, but you've changed it sufficiently to make it your own. plz finish it!! | |
| 1 Jun 2003 | Anonymous | Love the stories! | |
| 10 Nov 2003 |  Jeffrey J. Casey | You draw the plot of the story very well, keeping everything moving and interesting. Very well done. I think you've done a spectacular job with the story and I'm very interested to see what happens to Torgo. Again, well done. | |
| 29 May 2004 | Karin | I just finished the Prologue and chapter 1, I like it very much! It's a good story.
I'm gonna read the other chapters soon. but for now I wanna say that it's great! | |
