| 23 Aug 2001 |  Maggie Lee | Hey, you lerft a comment on my fanart page *-_- My stupid iMac won't let me log in. I think that you're the 'gifted' one ^_~ Your writing is incredible! I WANT TO KNOW MORE! WRITE MORE! GIVE ME ANOTHER CHAPTER! ::begs:: Pleeeeease!? | |
| 25 Aug 2001 | Christiaan, A.Iken | Ur first chapter is cool,a nd i like the fact the guys name is mine. U have a very pleasant style of writnig whichi snt pompouse and is very easy to get into. Keep it up and lets see more. | |
| 2 Sep 2001 | Margaret 'Siren' Robinson |  Hey Hey!! Great name! ;D Of course all Maggie's will unite. Your writting is amazing! Be sure to keep up the good work! *_* Let me know when you update. Thanks for dropping by o wonderful author! ;D | |
| 19 Mar 2002 | Prodigy | Stick to poems. Youre too descriptive in your short stories and your diction is quite unsophisicated. When a piece of writing is too descriptive, the story tends to go off-topic and the readers lose track of everything. Its like pulling a red herring all the time.   Maggie devlin replies: "Yes, hmmm. I find myself doing that a lot actually, I try to describe a scene so thoroughly I start tripping up. I think my particular problem with these stories is that I wasn't familiar enough with my characters and their situations, so the use of elaborate descriptions and bucket loads of hyperbole was a bit of an over compensation. As for the poem, it's been yanked cos apparently there wasn't enough fairy dust. Och well." | |
| 1 Apr 2002 | Maggie Lee | Maaaaaggie! The third chapter is so lovely ^-----^ I donut think it is overdescribed, me liiike! | |
| 26 Jul 2002 | Stephan P. Calloway | Hi. While I might agree you may lean towards excessive description in your story - I wouldn't say you should stick to poems  I have sometimes UNDER developed a scene which is worse I think. Anyhoo - something that helped me is to write the chapter, save it, then go off and do something else for a couple of days. Then I'll come back and read it and decide if the flow is true. If you recognize the "problem" (which is a GOOD thing) then you just need a technique for clearing it up. You are a gifted writer, and I will be coming back to watch for your FREQUENT updates (hint, hint). | |
| 5 Sep 2002 |  Margaret 'Siren' Robinson | -poke- Maggie Maggie Maggie Maggie.
I haven't talked to you in a looong time. ;-; | |
| 4 Nov 2002 |  E. Hanna | I hope this isn't an abandoned account. You're to good a writer to stop now (and that's not flattery). I will curse forever if I never hear the rest of Chris' story. Please, please go to my page and let me know when you write more. I will be in your debt.
And another thing, that's a bio that says the writer isn't egotistical. Let's see some pompous arrogance, I've got some to spare if you need something. Your writing is bold, so write a bold bio.
With thanks, encouragement, and admiration - E. | |
| 9 Feb 2003 |  Maggie Lee | Maggieeeee! ::makes little needy hands:: I keep checking back but there are no more chapters! Me wants! ::weeps:: ::more needy hands:: You're brilliant, I need more! | |
| 9 Aug 2003 |  Margaret 'Siren' Robinson | MAAAAAGGGGIEEE!! Sorry I never got a change to e mail you.... x.o I guess I've just been too lazy... or something. I would always think: "Hmm why not e mail Maggie..." but then I never would. ;-; So I vow to you! I will.... soon... someday... o_o  Maggie devlin replies: "ah, stress not been very diligent myself, my fellow maggie" | |
