Jon G. 'Bretwalda' Malek

O a link!!
*blushes*
Thanks.
I don't mean to captivate people! Don't tell everyone! I'll get arrested for kidnapping peeps!! Anyway that's Reao's job.
Cheers! *bows humbly* Well now that i'm here i'm gonna finish your own, slightly (by slightly i mean a strangle hold around the windpipe) captivating tale...End is in sight!!

In regards to the prologue of book two...(i just wasn't going to comment again)
Oh be proud! It's allowed as long as you don't parade it!
Glad it'll be a personally signed copy, i'd hate to think you had to get a lackey to sign it for you lmao!
I'll have a think on the Hans name front, i didn't want to say but his name is [guess what i'm saying...ah go on! Hey it isn't that bad!]
My tip for names is...well i just stare at the keyboard until a key jumps at me and they develop from there! Sad but true. Alternatively think up hints of their personality and go on a translation web-site. Haven't actually tried that yet, but it is useful for all kinds of names 'n' stuff.
Nobody can have a bigger Ego problem than me! Mine's alive...well kinda.["I am alive and i'm gonna be kicking you!" "Try it li'l Mewmu, just try it."]
Children...get corrupted HA! It's adult's who get corrupted by children. For they are conniving li'l sneaks...well i wasn't of course, i was perfect, still am, but then again i do not inhabited the real world.
*Ego Laughs hugely!* ("She has more faults that The Rift Valley!" "Hmm not a bad analogy from you. You been eating atlas' again?")

::Ego and I wish to apologise for the above comment. It happens when i comment on mainpages...(Kylia will testify to that...Sorry, but well i had to respond to the reply to the comment to the story. Stop asking questions and opinions and i will shut up!)[That'd be a first](button it!)
Anyway sorry. Not in right mind. I shall post this as a future warning to myself. Plus you shall suffer for your art, makes you appreciate it more when the weirdos come to call. [Call what?](Shut up!)::

Epic strikes again *sigh* Will go into enforced isolation i think. I am a danger to myself and those around me *casts eyes around* where'd everybody go?

Jon G. 'Bretwalda' Malek replies: "LOL it wasn't a challenge! (to do as long a message as possible!) But you beat it anyway! hahaThanks for the very very very entertaining message...it gave me hours of laughter! LOL "

Okay you asked for it...
This is purely from memory because as much as i love this, i really haven't got time to read it all over again just to answer your ego-tripping question

So For the Love of a Princess...
Right first off the most obvious is Hans...well d'uh
Then i guess there's Rynan and her father, a parental love of a daughter.
Then the lack of comes from Yanaton II and Aries or Nauthiz or whatever he's called as well as the Prophet evil guy lol (sorry names are not my friend tonight, Endroth i think)
Then of course the BIG one is Ixranyeth, of whom she is the prophet so everyone should love her if they love good!!
And of course Everett is included in the above as he believes her to be the prophet and such.
Then there is the love of the Elgorian subjects for their beloved Princess...

Will that do? Maybe more than Five, but it is on five basic levels... So do i win a prize?
You know you really shouldn't ask questions! You were warned about it before!!

Hmm, just wandering past on my rounds and i haven't had an update for ages!
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Will there be anymore? Ever? 'cause i'd really like some more of book II if you ever get round to it.

I don't remember how I got here, but I am glad I got here, cos though I have not read much yet, I am certainly going to read more.....

~§~ Carolin ~§~

Jon G. 'Bretwalda' Malek replies: "Hey Carolin! However you got here thanks for coming! I appreciate your comment and should let you know that I have a ticket in queue for a pretty big update! Thanks again!"

You have fabulous taste in music Just thought i might mention that. As for the stories, to be completely honest, I havent read them yet, but I do plan on getting to that when i have time, some cheetos and a beanbag to snuggle up in. It seems youve created quite an elaborate world that i just cant wait to get into.

Jon G. 'Bretwalda' Malek replies: " you haven't read yet! Why not?? LOL just joking! Take your time and make sure those cheetos are FRESH! Thanks for the comment "

I finally came around! Though I'd be lying if I said I read a single chapter of your book all the way through (laziness), I do get the impression that you have a great mind for details and description, and it seems you have a whole other world living in your creative head.

Your library is so big, and mine is so small. . . so small in fact, that I don't feel bad for asking you to stop by some time. It will be a quick visit.

Hi Jon ^^ I haven't been here in a while and I have A LOT of catching up to do! I don't have time at the moment, as my children won't let me sit down for more than ten minutes at a time, but sometime soon I will have to sit down and read 'Fleu' chapter by chapter. I've read the first five chapters, and as I said, a lot of catching up to do! I love it so far ^^

Awesome collection JOn! I'm so proud of you and I'm one of your biggest fans! Such an imagination you've got. I hope that someday, you get the chance to fully finalize your Story, and thus it'd get the chance to be published, finaly! Keep it up scholar! hehe

Am lovin' your story at the moment (haven't finished it yet, but thought I'd comment anyway ). I like the way you've developed this entire world - tell me, did you have a starting point, e.g. drawing a fansastical map and thinking 'hey I'd like to write a story about this place'?

Slight niggle: 'He-who-must-not-be-named' sounds very 'You-Know-Who' ish. 'The Nameless ONe' sounds like Eddings or Alison Croggon though, so I'm not sure what you could use instead.

Yeah, and sometimes the dialogue sounds a bit forced, not very 'real', whatever THAT means in a fantasy world.

But I really do like it as-of-so-far and will now go and read the rest!