| 9 May 2006 | Alan M. Holt | Welcome to the woods! ~First comment dance~ (dances til his feet fall off and he lands plop! back on his yoga mat) wow, first time, I didn't know that the first comment dance was so hard--lol okay, first of all, I LOVE YOUR WORK!!!!! this is GOOD, seriously, except for the few mistakes I found, it is awesome, keep it up, I left a comment on your prologue and I am planning on leaving one on your first chapter--by the way, i like your prologue more than your first chapter. may the stars shine on you and the elfwood moderators always accept your tickets!  Mats Fällman replies: "Thank you very much! This is a early draft that is currently undergoing a remake, and hopefully I will post the first 5 chapters including the prologue soon.. without errors regarding spelling and grammar etc. Come back soon!!!" | |
| 11 May 2006 | Abigail F. Taylor | Welcome to the Woods! I'm about to embark on the journey you've written us, and I before I did, I just wanted to say hello and do the second comment jitter. =^.^= | |