|26 Feb 2002|| Natasha Tep|
oOo.....aaaaahhhhhh.......SO GOOD! SO GOOD! ^_^* write more!!!!*L* I am, I am!! Though you'll find much more stuff at http://fanfiction.net/profile.php?userid=154927 ^_^;;
|27 Apr 2002|| Debra L Turpin|
I'll be back, I'm still reading. Some of your writing will come into it's own as you gain life experience. You seem to have quite a few irons in the fire without completing anything. That can become a life-long habit... (I speak from experience!) I'd like to see you focus and tweak one of these stories into completion. It's very easy to "write like we speak" but that doesn't always make it easy for other readers. Not everyone is from the same part of the country as we are. Slang and such for a particular character is good, but not for the writing technique itself. That's distracting. You don't have a whole lot of that, but I can see it forming. And there IS such a thing as too much description. Terry Brooks described things half-to-death in the first part of his Shanara series. BORING!
Nuff said. I like Clara Riddle. Let me know if you ever decide to write more.Mweee!
Thanks for the tips, and it was very helpful. Everything you're reading here is FAR from recent work, and I can only hope my newer stuff is much better. Unfortunatly, I can't put much of it up on here because it's either fanfic, too highly rated, or just not pertaining to fantasy or scifi
So to see more http://fanfiction.net/profile.php?userid=154927 ^_^
|8 May 2002|| Negative Space|
Your writing could definitely be improved. You seem to wander of your subject at times, and there's nothing to keep the reader interested; I found it hard getting through The Legend of Clara Riddle.
Try and focus your work and make it more interesting.All right! Thanks for the tips
|28 Jun 2002|| Avis 'Dragonfriend' Langcaster|
OMG! SHINGA! ::glomp:: I didn't know you had writing here, too! When are you gonna put Black Angel up here? It MUST be up here! I demand it! Its too good for it NOT to be up here. ^_^ And more stuff! More stuff!!!!!!*is glomped* ACK! Er. Hi Dragon
And I'm not sure if I will. It might not be approved or anything, so I guess FictionPress will have to do for now. ^_^;; I'll try to write more stuff to go up here. I'm workin' at it!
|17 Aug 2002|| Emily Grist|
You are so sweet in your details! Your bio was even great to read. And so was your little bio on the pagy thingy. That's what caught me...
Your laughing friend,
Emily Lynn McDurman
P.S. My stuff is dark, your is very emotion, congrats to that! :*You mean the 'errr' thing, or what...? *lol* o.O um. I've been told I am amusing. And unfortunately, unlike many friends of mine, I cannot blame it on drugs.
Some of my stuff has been dark, just not the majority of it *lol*
|13 Mar 2003|| Tasha C. Bridge|
I read your story Black Angel and loved it.I don't know what else to say but you've done a wonderful job on that story please write more. Thank you very much! I'm glad you like that one. It's one of my favorites.
I plan to write much more for it
|2 Dec 2003|| Only me|
I love ur pictures n now i want 2 read cyberseed, but i cant find it, were can i read it???
|6 Sep 2004|| Riddle in the dark|
Awesome story's Manda-chan!^__~
I love your songs too, those are great! Love ya!
|1 Jan 2006|| Lee Josephs|
I just read 'Blood One' and found it very emotionally powerful. Having just scanned the titles of your other stories I have a feeling there'll be a similar kind of emotional power to those as well. I will check - if only to prove myself wrong
|27 May 2008|| Tayla Waterworth|
You write the most incredible stories, and yet you’re also such a talented artist. I loved "Blood One" as well as your pictures of the Black Angel. Absolutely amazing work.