|17 Jun 2004|| Pedestal Guy|
You have good work here, it shows promise. However, I think that your "Quality literature" needs at least one straight out story with a continuous plotline and a premice all your own.
Wow, that wan't very positive. Maybe if I added some actions witin some asterix I can fix it.
*Can't feel right ear.*
Wait, no, that wasn't positive that was just a statment of condition. An odd condition but I did just give blood. Wait, that still doesn't make sence. Huh, guess I'll just try again.
*Drops a fruit basket next to the cookies and the good thrashing disguised as constructive criticism.*
*An orange falls out because it was dropped and not set down gently.*
*The orange rolls down the floor and stops at the foot of the new elfwood writer.*
(What will you do? What will you do?) Maria Sergio
replies: "*grabs orange* *eats while thinking of a suitable response* *pause**giggles then runs off to read story comments*"
|17 Jun 2004|| Anson Dean Brehmer|
Hello! Found your link on Muffin's site, so I'll check your stories out and give you a good thrashing...er...constructive criticism...yeah! That's the ticket! Maria Sergio
replies: "yay a good thrashing... * dance of glee*"
|22 Jun 2004|| E. Hanna|
We are pleased to announce that "E's revival" has been linked from E. Hanna's main page. We hope that there will be more lovely stories to follow in your writing career. Maria Sergio
replies: "*salutes the writing master*yes sir there will be more stories, hopefully some which are actually good, and you will be the first to know! *blinks at your use of "we"* Has E been cloned? Has he been taking grammer lessons from the Queen? find out next time on the next episode of Elfwood High...."
|22 Jun 2004|| Alice Muffin Girl Smith|
^_^ Welcome to Wyvern's, my dear! Sorry I'm a bit late, but I'll make it up with bakery products!
*happily hands you a freshly baked assortment of house warming muffins, cupcakes, cookies, and assorted pleasant pastries*
On a side note, my big sister's name is Maria. Did I just notice this connection? Why yes. Yes I did... *brain makes a most interesting sizzling noise* Why am I telling you this? Because... *sizzle sizzle* I can't belive I only just noticed this now... *sizzle sizzle snap* Maria Sergio
replies: "I love you ^_^ and your sister! (because she has such a wonderful name)"
|27 Jun 2004|| Alice Muffin Girl Smith|
Just finished reading your tales! Must say, I'm rather impressed with you, Miss Maria. ^_^ Most particularly with your grammar: it was very nearly perfect. But also, with the writing style itself... it's rather pleasant, and quite easy to follow without being dumbed down... ^_^ I can't wait to see what else you can turn out, my dear. ^_^
Also, sorry it took so long for me to get back to you!
Oh, and do you want a writer's link at my page, or should I just keep you linked as an artist? You'd be in the Shiny section if you wanted a writer's link. ^_^ Maria Sergio
replies: "you have honoured me most greatly with your praise.. *hugs the mifster* thanx so much!I can have a writer's link? funky!! but I like my special link in the small subcategory you made because I was an artist ^_^ so I'll stay there... moving scares me -_-"
|3 Jun 2008|| Anon.|
it’s funny that we both have the same name. I thought I was the only Maria Sergio