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Kelsey M. Graham

"Blink´s Story" by Kelsey M. Graham

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This is a story about a person named Blink, a content, generous, kindhearted being of no consequence whatsoever.
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Blink hummed a shred of an old tune, the words of which were long forgotten. As he traipsed toward home, his thoughts were chiefly concerned with what his beloved wife, Evi, had made for supper. He paused for a moment at an old stone gate, all that was left, perhaps, of some great stone fortress in days long past, its makers now dust. It now lead to nowhere, accompanied only by two ancient statues to either side. It was for these that Blink had stopped, and he affectionately brushed fall leaves and dry bird leavings from the two monoliths’ laps and shoulders, which was as far as he could reach, despite his height.

Blink didn’t know who made them or even what they were- guardians, kings, derelict idols of equally forgotten gods- all such knowledge had long faded with their makers. Made featureless and indistinct by a thousand years of wind and rain, the two weathered sentinels stared with empty sockets through centuries of greatness and neglect, silent witnesses to joy and sorrow both, as the entirety of mortal life cycles passed between them.

He liked to think that some long-ago had commanded a great empire and had ordered the statues and gate built to create an eternal record of his greatness. Evi always said that he had his head stuck in the glorified past, and should stop thinking about long-dead ancestors and start thinking about Blink, who still needed to eat and sleep and provide for his family. Blink always replied that he would like to leave something of real importance- real, lasting value- to his two sons, Tassel and Shale, and his three little daughters, Thread, Doe, and Nut. Nut was hardly more than a baby, but she could already crawl everywhere, insisting on ‘helping’ her siblings, while really just frustrating them further.

Blink smiled, lost in his gold-tinged thoughts about his beloved family, when his stomach rumbles, reminding of the nearness of sunset. He had worked a long time in the fields that day, and was positively exhausted. Funny, how lately things were becoming harder to do, tools becoming heavier, the strain in his back when he bent down was greater than he remembered. He often felt stiff and sore on cold mornings. Perhaps he had better start bringing his sons with him, it was almost harvest time, after all…

He paid his final regards to the statues, and continued on his way. He could almost smell dinner cooking, whatever it was. He stopped suddenly and sneezed, wrinkling his nose at the unfamiliar smell. Had Evi burned the meal? No, it smelled wrong, harsh and greasy, almost like…

Without any conscious decision, Blink broke into a run. Something was wrong, wrong, wrong, and he could feel it with each beat of his heart, each ragged breath, as long dormant instincts whispered warnings in his ears.

He turned the last bend and beheld the flaming remnants of his family’s home. His wife lay dead upon the doorstep, his sons lay a little farther off, cut down as they tried to defend their family, axes meant for woodcutting in their untrained hands.

He heard coarse laughter and he turned to see a group of human soldiers, bearing the standard of one of their kings. Completely at ease amid the carnage, they talked and sniggered brashly as they cleaned the blood of his daughters from their swords.

Blink couldn’t move. He was paralyzed- crippled with shock, terror,-and, had he known it,-hatred, but all he could do was sink to his knees as his world came crashing down.

Nut stirred suddenly- “Da-Da-Daddy?” she whispered, looking straight at him- It hurts, Daddy, make it stop, Daddy, make it all better! How many times had he heard her say those words, looking trustingly to him to heal her newest scrape or cut. Little Nut, always insisting that she ‘was a big girl now’. But there was nothing, no Daddy, no magic, no power that could ever make this better.

One of the soldiers saw the movement and carelessly swung his battleaxe, splitting the toddler’s skull like a melon. He spat on the little corpse. “Filthy orc spawn.” He caught sight of Blink and grinned, hefting the bloodstained axe. He walked up to the kneeling orc. “What, not going to try to run away?” he asked, smirking. When Blink made no move to respond, the man grabbed a hank of his hair, forcing his head up. “Not going to attack?” He asked, almost quizzically. He frowned when he saw a glimmering in the other’s eyes. The orc wasn’t looking at him, he was staring at the burning orc nest, and he was- Silliness. Orcs can’t cry. Something stirred in him, a vague feeling of horror and- guilt? But it passed, leaving only his duty and fear-driven rationality. Shrugging away any lingering doubts, he brought the axe down again.

The man didn’t even bother to watch what had been Blink hit the ground. He had already turned to his men, giving the signal to move out. Turning back to Blink, he contemptuously cleaned the axe on the ork’s tunic. “Throw the corpses in the building- let’s cleanse this orkish taint from these lands.”

←- Ashes, Ashes... | Faerie Bar -→

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28 May 200845 Hi
Um it%u2019s sad I wonder is it phyically possible for an ork to cry.

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "Yes. DIE. (and it’s ’cry?’ not ’cry.’ ) comment on my stories again, brother mine, and I will- (Lupus: you did ask him to comment... Me: yes, but if he keeps being so annoying about it I’d rather he not) "
3 Jun 2008:-) Amanda Nikese
Oooh this is good. I love stuff like this - alternate perspectives.
Maybe something else you could do to underscore the difference in perception between human and orc is have the soldiers talk about how ugly the statues that so entranced blink at the begining are. Not that you haven%u2019t done a wonderful job of making your point already.
Again, I really like this.


:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "*bows* thank you. If ever I do a rewrite of this, I’ll try to include that, as it is a very good idea *waves happily*"
10 Jun 2008:-) Kelsey M. Graham
okay, since no one has complained about the ending, I will. Truth to tell, I had no idea how to end this after the bit with the toddler dying. This is the original ending. I’ve come up with at least 4 more ideas on how to end this (2 ended with Blink surviving- I felt guilty for killing him off) But this was the only one that would get the point across. I also considered having Veloren tell this story to Raven, because this is a very Veloren-ish story. The problem is that I like Blink, and I feel really, really guilty for doing this to him. But I had to. Medusa
14 Jun 2008:-) Meaghan M. Jendrysik
well you sugested your point when you first intruduced us to blink, you shouted it in our ears when nut died, screamed it to the heavens when blink cried and drove your point home when the soldier mecilessly killed blink. point being: no matter the outside, we all bleed red.

still in utter aww of your writing...heh mooo
4 i’m coming for you kelsey-chan

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "....Except for those of us who bleed green. Or blue. Or black. Or.... "
2 Aug 2008:-) Natalie RedWolf Diebolt
Wow, I totally didn’t see that coming. That was perfectly executed. The only thing that remotely suggested a difference of people was the names. Terribly sad though. Well done.

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "Thank you. It makes me sad too. Poor Blink. I feel guilty..."
3 Aug 2008:-) Jake Diebolt
As a father myself, this was actually a little disturbing to me. Nevertheless, You did it very well. I thought I saw something sinister coming, but wasn’t sure what.

I like the idea presented at the beginning that the orcs once had their own empire with all its cultural trappings. on a side note, have you read the webcomic Goblins? It has similar themes. The site is www.goblinscomic.com.

And I won’t complain about the ending. As for the guilt, well...we all feel it sometimes. We can’t force our characters into happy-go-lucky endings any more than we can save them from their demise.

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "Sorry for disturbing you. wow. this is the third webcomic this week. I love it... although I’m not sure whether to laugh or feel sad. Dies-Horribly! poor child..."
24 Sep 2008:-) Nicoline Badenhorst
Wah! Why do you always manage to catch me off guard?! I should know by now that you always take a different view on things, but there, again, you showed me a side of human nature that I’d conveniently forgotten about! You’ve got a wonderful knack for stunning people and making them see the other side. *shakes her head sadly* What state have humans gotten themselves into! Thank you for a story that really shook me awake, and don’t feel bad, you did what you had to do.

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "Humans are the ultimate villains. Not only are they capable of acts of mass destruction and slaughter, with no other reason than "Because they’re different than me", but they can go home to their wife and children afterward with a completely clean conscience.
...
I still haven’t forgiven myself for the ’melon’ line. "
6 Oct 2008:-) Lydia stephanie Barker
I was not expecting this at all. this is heart wrenching. how did you come up with this?? or well, I guess that it’s not that difficult to see this kind of carnage in the world. really makes you think and feel. great job

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "This story had been stewing in the back of my mind for ages. I wanted to write something from the PoV of someone who is normal, with no special powers, weapons, or anything- a cannonfodder character. Finally wrote it at about 10 at night by flashlight. :/ "
24 Mar 2009:-) Patricia M. D´Angelo
A definite take on humanity’s inhumanity. Nicely written.

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "Thank you! This is my second favorite one, even though I felt horrendously guilty for writing it."
22 Jun 2009:-) Tom Draco Noir Taylor
Sad and touching, this is such a well written tale, or more properly, a fable or parable. the Holocaust, The Crusades, the Doctrine of Manifest Destiny,the Inquisition, Two World Wars, Rwanda, Terrorists- of course we would take it into Middle Earth.

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "...Wasn’t thinking of them at the time, but...
Mostly I wanted a story about a character who wasn’t special, or magical, or strong, in a world where lots of other people are. *sigh* I still feel guilty for doing this to Blink."
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About 'Blink's Story':
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 • Created by: :-) Kelsey M. Graham
 • Copyright: ©Kelsey M. Graham. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Blink, Orc, Orcs, Sad
 • Categories: Fights, Duels, Battles, Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Orc, Goblins, Trolls, Trollocs..., Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Warrior, Fighter, Mercenary, Knights, Paladins, European Traditions, Mythology
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