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Kelsey M. Graham

"The Sea Is Eternal" by Kelsey M. Graham

SF&F Picture 6 out of 9 by Kelsey M. Graham
 
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Based on a dream I had last night.
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The Sea is eternal. That is what Grandfather had always said, whenever he talked about his life. People may come and go, lives and livelihoods come and go, but the Sea is eternal. He had always spoken of the Sea a personality, something to be loved and appeased. Appeasement would be good now. The waters were a gray, stormy color, and were crashing with a fury that seemed controlled by the slightest of tethers. Even on the rocks where she sat, Gull was lashed by the spray, could feel the muted rage coming from the Sea. Never had it been like this before. The Sea is like a child- when it is hurt, it lashes out. How can an Ocean be hurt? She wondered, searching the horizon for her grandfather’s fish-boat. Grandfather will be fine she reassured herself He knows the Sea, knows how to calm it. Her Grandfather was the village’s wave-speaker, old though he was. He would be fine. Why, any moment now, the storm would abate, and there he would be, laughing and teasing her for being such a worrier. Gull smiled and propped her chin upon her hand, and waited.

The storms continued, and her Grandfather did not return. She waited, but there was no sign of him. Finally, she left her perch and went inside, returning with a conch shell. Oh, Grandfather… Aware of the villager’s silent eyes upon her, she took it to the rocky outcropping at the edge of the village, a place where the earth ended abruptly and the Sea began. She took a breath, than blew a long, undulating blast with the conch. Before the echoes faded, she leaped, diving into the water.

Blue-green world, swimming with all sorts of fish and creatures. Sand below, white amid the coral and rocks. She could stay forever here, in this strange, silent world. Caught in limbo between worlds, water like silk against her skin. Child. She looked around, startled. Child. She touched the conch, confused. And then- she was there

Blackness, like a death shroud, covering the waves, smothering life for sea creatures, birds, and humans alike. Strange machines, alien to her, slide through the waves, inexorable as a death march. And pain- unbelievable pain, as though her soul was being ripped from her body.

They are coming.

What- what are they?
They do not belong here. They are from somewhere Other. I do not know them.
Can you stop them?
Not without you.
Very well.
She touched the conch again.

As she watched the machines continue their polluted, stinking way, she realized with shock that these Others were not human. Instead of pale blue, their skin was an unnatural pale pink, and they had no gills to be seen. As she watched these strange invaders, anger boiled up inside her. Slowly, she began turning, hands outstretched, and the water slowly rose, as she spun faster and faster, it following her hands, till at last she stood still, in the eye of the tempest. One of the creatures saw, and screamed “Hooruchaine!”. The others began gabbling in the same incomprehensible tongue. Gull smiled, drunk on power, and pointed. The ships vanished in a wall of white.


Gull woke up to the sound of waves. Not furious, crashing waves, but gentle, calm lapping rivulets. She sat up, stretching, and looked around at the clear, blue sky and calm waters… All was well. She looked up, and saw the eyes of the village folk watching her. As she stood, they bowed respectfully and walked away. She was the wave-speaker now.

←- 'Deusa | The Speaker's Son -→

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19 Jun 2007:-) Jacqueline 'Jac' Tanner
Oh this story is amazing! i adore the emotion you have in this tiny short little piece. The comment on pollution with the machines coming to invade was really nice and err... for lack of a better word political of you. I think this could easily be extended into something longer... i would like to know more about what it is to be the wave-speaker... does she live alone with her grandpa? why has he gone out into the ocean? is he dead... see there is so much you could extend and talk more about. For being based on just a dream this was really lovely... i really enjoyed this little story!

56 Kelsey M. Graham replies: "I wasn't trying to be political..really... as for the questions: yes she lives with her grandfather, yes, he's dead, and for the rest... figure it out yourself *cackles insanely*"
9 Aug 2007:-) Mandy Burnham
*jaw drops* That was and is gorgeous. You're writing is smooth and clean. You have drawn the reader alone with you into a wondrous world that NEEDS to be seen, tasted, and felt. *eyes grow green with jealousy* I sure wish that I'd commanded even half your tallent when I was 14. That was both engaging and breathtaking

1 Kelsey M. Graham replies: "hmm.. tasted? only if you like sushi..thanks!"
22 Dec 2007:-) Kelsey Lynn Reed
* "He had always spoken of the Sea a personality," - do you mean ’the Sea as a personality’ ? I’m a tiny bit confused...
* ", it following her hands..." - i think you could probably replace ’it’ with ’the water’ and it would sound a bit better

I drool over this story! I love it! -happy dance- You connected the beginning and ending in an amazing way. by the way, it’s kind of strange, before I read this today I wrote a story that should be posted soon about invaders coming and destroying things strange the way things turn out sometimes!

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "thaks for the edits. Alas, that so many of my stories are plagued by errors *snaps out of it* anyway, glad you liked it!"
17 Apr 2008:-) Jake Diebolt
Hey, I havent been on Elfwood for a while, so I havent had a chance to blow through your entire shelf yet. Be patient!

I like the atmosphere (or hydrosphere?) of this story. You really set the mood and setting quite well. Its not really long enough to get me fully invested in the character, but it doesnt seem like that was your intention anyway. Very cool story, I’ll try and get through your shelf some other time.

PS: When is the next part of the Darkness series coming? Anxiously waiting!
14 Jun 2008:-) Meaghan M. Jendrysik
A dream you say? do you think it could mean anything? very interesting. I love dream stories, they are always so vivid and full of life.

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "I have a lot of weird dreams, this is not the strangest. I don’t think dreams mean anything, but they make for great stories. And this is loosely based- I changed quite a bit.
Actually, I have a much stranger dream story that I’m going to put up, after I stop being lazy..."
2 Aug 2008:-) Natalie RedWolf Diebolt
Really cool story. I am honestly not sure if the goosebumps I had were because of a chill or the story though. It was too coincidentally at the end to be a chill I think. I like the different human perspective thing going on.
14 Oct 2008:-) Lydia stephanie Barker
i love how your stories just flow and pull you in. I wish that i could write like you. wonderful job yet again.
19 Oct 2008:-) Nicoline Badenhorst
Wow. Stunned me. Again.

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "*pats on head* You are easily stunned. But thank you."
20 Mar 2009:-) Patricia M. D´Angelo
Engaging story. Though I would have to agree with the other comment, that using the word human is confusing for the reader.

As she watched the machines continue their polluted, stinking way, she realized with shock that these Others were not human. Instead of pale blue, their skin was an unnatural pale pink, and they had no gills to be seen. As she watched these strange invaders, anger boiled up inside her.

We could still get the perspective you were going for maybe by saying something like:

As she watched the machines continue their polluted, stinking way, she realized with shock that these Others were not like them. Instead of pale blue, these animals had an unnatural pale pink skin, and they had no gills to be seen. As she watched these strange invaders, anger boiled up inside her.



:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "Yes, that does work a lot better. Thanks!"
22 Jun 2009:-) Tom Draco Noir Taylor
great story, and i find it fascinating that it was based on a dream! My poem ’The Lonely Merman’ was actually based on a dream as well- though it pales by comparison to work like yours. my wife Lynn often dreams complete stories, and in vivid color. I dream in color as well, but have been told only mad people dream in color. I hope this isn’t true, I would miss my invisible triceratops if they tried to cure me.

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "Can’t even imagine dreaming in black-and-white, the color is the strongest thing in my dreams. Insanity is in the eye of the beholder. Don’t worry, invisible triceratopses can walk through walls!
...I just realized that made no sense. cafffieeennnne....neeed cafffeeeeennnnneeee. @.@ "
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About 'The Sea Is Eternal':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Kelsey M. Graham
 • Copyright: ©Kelsey M. Graham. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Sea, Ocean, Wave-speaker, Invade, Humans, Water, Girl, Storm
 • Categories: Extrateresstial, Alien Life Forms, Mermaids, Leviathans, Underwater Creatures, History-based, Parallel or Alternate Reality/Universe
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