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Kelsey M. Graham

"Too Trusting" by Kelsey M. Graham

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Another Medusa story, this time a sadder version. Yes, I know it's too short. I stayed a little closer to the actual story this time, but I had her awake, instead of asleep, as she is in greek mythology. (Lupus: I can see the headlines now: 'Man sneaks into cave, chops head off of sleeping pregnant woman, gets away with it'... Greek mythology has crappy heroes.)
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‘But in the mirror of his polished shield Reflected saw Medusa…. ‘Then backward with an unerring blow he sped, And from her body lop’d at once her head…’ -Ovid, Metamorphosis

Snakes everywhere, layers upon layers of scaly, hissing serpents, blocking out the light with darting tongues and slithering bodies, drowning her in serpentine whispering darkness…
Medusa jolted out of the dream into another nightmare, reality. The snakes had followed her from her dream, were surrounding her head like dreadful, reptilian hair…. With a final surge she woke up completely, into the true horror that was her life. The snakes crawling around her head were attached to her, part of Athena’s curse. She groaned as she got to her feet, heavy belly swaying slightly. Seven months ago, a lifetime ago, she had been happy, a person, not a twisted, wrecked monster. Suitors had come from far and wide to court her. She had been beautiful then, with long, silky hair that was the envy of all her friends. Life had been a game, carefree- and careless. Because, as often happens, word got to Neptune… And he had come for her.
Her mind blanched at the memory of what had happened next. She had been so trusting, then. So willing to believe the good in people. She had thought that she was safe, that no one could hurt her. But he did, leaving her broken and violated at the gates of Athena’s shrine. Athena, the virgin goddess. With the usual cruelty and unreasonableness of the gods, she had punished Medusa, taking her beautiful hair and replacing it with snakes. Now, shunned by all her one-time friends and suitors, she had fled to this dank cave to live with her sisters… And my children, when the time comes, she thought, touching her bulging middle. Poor children, with a monster for a mother.
A loud call from the door interrupted her thoughts. “Medusa! Are you there? It’s me, Perseus!” Medusa almost wept with delighted relief. Perseus… Her old friend… She thought he’d abandoned her, just like everyone else. But how could she ever have doubted him? He must have just been busy, him in the hero business and all. But of course he wouldn't forget her, he wouldn't care what she looked like.
With a joyful cry she wrenched open the door, only to be met with brilliant light shining from a golden shield- and cold steel hissing a death song in her ears. As her headless body crumpled softly to the ground, Perseus whispered “I’m sorry, Medusa. You always were too trusting…”
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15 May 2007:-) Sarah-amy haley
*gasps* Amazing, so different from the other one, but just as good. Congratulations!
16 May 2007:-) Sarah-amy haley
Can I add this to a tour I'm making

2 Kelsey M. Graham replies: "uh, sure, that'd be great!"
15 Jun 2007:-) ALEXANDRA DVINITNINOVA
Very good start, just strive to be the best at whatever you do, never stop improving. Don't just try, do it. Knowledge is alway respected.
The best start is to learn as many languages as you can. (Heinrich Schliemann)

21 Kelsey M. Graham replies: "Danke Schoen 14 (Lupus: Show off.) Am not. (Are too) Am not (You are too) okay.. maybe a little..."
22 Dec 2007:-) Kelsey Lynn Reed
that was very depressing and yet brilliant! I was getting all excited that her friend came back and then WHAM! No more head for Medusa...sadness yet a wonderful tale ^_^

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "we had to do a greek mythology unit in class, and I wrote 2 essays on Medusa.. The whole story made me really mad- I mean- Perseus just killed an innocent woman who never did anything, and he’s called a hero. Greeks valued beauty far too much- anything ugly never got a happy ending. I got a little bitter over it as you can see."
14 Jun 2008:-) Meaghan M. Jendrysik
the way he apoligised at the end....it really drives the tragedy of the thing. and all those people who just as soon shunned her as loved her, it makes the characters seem real and modern.

"I’m sorry Medusa. You always were too trusting" yano, he probabaly was one of the few people that cared for her, even after wards, else why would he have apologised. some random hero or poser friend would have laughed and said something scathing like "serves you right"
3 Aug 2008:-) Natalie RedWolf Diebolt
Pardon the unintended pun but I have a hard time wrapping my head around what exactly happened? Why kill her and her unborn child? I must of forgotten a crucial bit of mythology there and I am also unsure as to if she is can turn people to stone or not in this version.

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "In the story of Medusa, Perseus’s mom is getting married to a king who hates Perseus. Perseus shows up without a wedding gift, and when asked, boasts that he will bring the head of the gorgon Medusa as a wedding gift. The king is all too pleased since he thinks his new stepson is going to die, and sends him off to decapitate Medusa. By the way, Medusa’s children do survive in the myth. One is Pegasus, and the other is a giant. Spring up from her blood or something. 14 greek mythos is weird."
11 Aug 2008:-) Nicoline Badenhorst
Wow. You got me thinking.

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "that is my goal in life. Thanks!"
20 Mar 2009:-) Patricia M. D´Angelo
You’ve given wonderful voice to Greek Mythology. Great line about too trusting. It ties it all together quite nicely.

:-) Kelsey M. Graham replies: "Learning about Greek/Roman mythology every year does seem to rub off on a person, if not quite the way my teachers expected. (seriously, why can’t they teach us Norse or celtic myths for once? ANYTHING?)
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er... Thank you. I’ll stop ranting now."
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About 'Too Trusting':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Kelsey M. Graham
 • Copyright: ©Kelsey M. Graham. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Medusa, Perseus, Sad, Snake, Snakes, Mythology, Greek, Greekmythology, Trusting
 • Categories: Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, European Traditions, Mythology
 • Views: 430


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