| 2 Dec 2003 | JM Larsson | Ack! What's wrong with you people? The lady needs comments! [JackLined Jess does a first comment jig for you] //Silverweb dances on her toes// ::And the Elven Maiden gracefully performs a first comment dance herself:: I think it interesting that you know nothing about terms like "run-on sentence" and any kinds of poem structure, yet still have a very unique voice. You should defifntely practice, and learn more about complex grammer [shudder], because you could be great!  Marie Eriksson replies: "Oh, thanks! I got a first-comment dance! And you're right, I know absolutely nothing about writing in the "correct" way because no one ever told me what it is. I guess I'll have to ask my swedish teacher to let us know about it ." | |
| 27 Dec 2003 | Ellyn Daly | *appears and does second comment sprinkler...Vanishes...Appears again having forgotten to comment* very nice poems! Well done! K, well ta! *vanishes* | |