SciFi & Fantasy Fiction and Stories by Marie Thorsen

Very inspirational writing indeed, I especially like the duality of the stories that shows some of the paradoxality of the human condition. I'm eagerly looking forward to reading more of your work, since you clearly have the heart of the story-teller.

P.S. Someone that writes like this should in no way call themselves mediocre!

You write in a very original and beautiful way Marie, my favorite is A Breath of Silence, when might we see more of your stories? Soon I hope!

Marie Thorsen replies: "  Thank you very much for your comment Hehe, I don't really anything clever to say, I just wanted to thank you. "

This new story of yours, David's Swan, spins a yarn of myth that is fascinating me already Marie! I can't wait to see what unravels down the road

Awesome work - for those who haven't yet started: a talented writer herein dwelleth! I came here in a flurry of links and thought I'd just take a quick check of one story then come back later but it was so good I had to keep clicking... and clicking... ;-) Great work! I shall return for more...

Marie Thorsen replies: "*blushes* Thank you so much, hahaha, I am smiling up to my ears now I really love recieving comments. Good or bad, it really encourages you to keep polishing those stories, bringing in more and always doing your best Thank you."

You are a wonderful writer Marie...I've just finished reading all your stories here and I love them. There's not a single remark to make. Keep on writing!
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Marie Thorsen replies: "Haha, I cannot believe there is not but one. Now that I am finally back home with my internet and own computer, I am really looking forward to reading your stories.

Thank you for the beautiful compliment. "

Wow, even your bio is a work of literary art. Obviously you can excel in something since your writing is excellent and I hope you use that ability and share your gift with the world.

Marie Thorsen replies: "I will certainly try my best. After the summer vacation, I am going to study Litteraturic History at the University. Hopefully what I learn there, plus a lot practise, will allow me to do just that =)"

*tiptoes inside and puts a plate with a huge slice of chocolate cake on Marie's desk*

*writes a little note*

"Someone delivered a cake on my page and I'm sharing it with the people I love"

*looks longingly at Marie's shelf, restraining herself to take up one of the scrolls to reread*

Too bad I have to get up early tomorrow and I don't have the time to stay

Marie Thorsen replies: "*smiles brightly as she reads the note* Awww, thank you! *puts up a cot in the corner and places a note on the pillow* "Now you can read 'till you drop!" *draws a small smiling face in the corner of the note*"

I came close to forgetting your name. Maybe you should leave a comment on my page. That way it will be easier for me to find your page again. Wink, wink. Nudge, nudge. Need I say more, know what I mean, know what I mean?

I just wanted to thank you for all the comments, and assure you that Arild's age will be commented on presently. I shall repay the rest of my debts promptly when my last exam is done. According to my plans, I'll have net access again the day after tomorrow, and then I'll be commenting.

Marie Thorsen replies: "Ah, you have not the slightest debt to pay! Your critique of my stories has been very rewarding, and I am sorry for not commenting on your stories sooner. Fortunantly, I still have many stories left to read and learn about your orcs and Gods. As you, I am planning on reading and commenting on these as soon as my last examn is done. "

For some reason the site wouldn’t let me post to your comment so I’ll try it here.

Thanks for the kind words. I don’t know that I felt like Snow White could not act independantly before the men in her life disappeared, but given the historical context, I don’t know that she was really modivated to until that time. Mid-evil germany was hardly a genderally egalitarian society. I think rather that the tragedy in her life gave her the push she needed to find her own inner strength and independance. You might check out "The Embrace" I think it has a stronger female lead, but at the same time, male or female, I don’t know that our need for other people or the desire to be protected makes us weak. Rather I simply think it makes us human. Thanks for the thoughtful comment and I hope you’ll check out more of my work when you get a chance. I’ll take another look at your library too!