"Alone" by Mark Lonsinger

Very Good! The hand could of been a bit...softer I suppose, but still a VERY VERY VERY good picture (dare I say...EXCELENT!)

I like this picture, except I think a little more emotion could have been shown in her eyes, perhaps a tear? OTherwise, great! I love how you do pictures of females, showing their bodies but yet in a sophisticated manner showing their emotions well, exploiting more of how they look overall than just certain body parts! Keep up the good work!

Dang! That's one mean mage...he even took her buttons!

This is one of the best pieces I've seen. I've thought of the whole story of what the mage did. I guess he took back the robes he gave her, then brought her outside both to humiliate her and let her see his revenge. I agree with the emotion bit but I supose she's in the denile phase, wandering about feeling that its all a dream to shocked to feel her true sorrow. Makes me want to go to this place so she doesn't have to be alone.

I must disagree with the comments here. In my eyes I see that she doesn't need more emotion in her eyes because it is already there. That is why it looks so empty, because she is empty. All she loved is being destroyed and so it is destroying her soul. I also disagree about the ways you all try to explain her robes being somewhat off of her. Can you not see that they are soiled and torn? She probably did that while escaping. Though this mage clearly meant for her to live, he probably wished to scare her first. To leave with her for the rest of her life the fact that she should have died too. Well what do I know? Oh and yes you guessed it I must also argue about the hand because I argue about everything. Why should her hand be softer? She may be a woman but let us be realistic, hands are not always delicate. And to me with the fact that her hand is clutching her robe (not a soft weak hand but a strong one) it shows to me that at least for a while she will continue on after this horror. Of course I am a writer and so these things just form in my mind quickly. What do I know? Anyway, now for my own look to complain about Mark's picture! Yay. I think that my only complaints about it are these two things. First of all I think you should have set fire to some of the grass because it is so close to it it should be on fire by now. Secondly I think her eyebrows are a bit off. Like one is shorter then the other. I don't know ignore me.

Cliche watermelon breasted manga girl? Far from it...

Cliche' watermelon breasted manga girl with dramatic background

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