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"Song of Shey, the Wyvern Slayer" by Adrian H. Wood

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Of Shey il Fyel, legendary queen of the Mesillieth, and the slaying of Rai'sheen...

This translated modern version of the elvish ballad has been handed down through many generations and is set in the world of Ysis, long before the Mark.

This is easily my longest piece of poetry and you can pretty much count on me never trying something like this again. I hope you enjoy it though and please view the notes right at the bottom before reading!
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Song of Shey, the Wyvern Slayer



Hark, the legend of Shey il Fyel
The noble and the brave
Who’s gallantry and steely nerve
Each ev’ry elf doth crave
The mighty knight, the purest heart
Our kingdom’s sacred queen
Lore’s greatest quest, she ventured forth
And slew the beast Rai’sheen

Of ages passed, in times elapsed
This epic story tells
When Ilén swayed the Lyvinel
From tree-top citadels
An era long before the Mark
When Ysis bore wild plains
Where forest’s toils and gatherings
Were tight on elvish reigns

T’was then that ev’ry animal
On land or sea or air
Clear places in life’s cycle held
And fated roles to bear
Mesillieth and beast alike
Lived peaceful hand in hand
For flora’s gift and fauna’s lure
Swept unspoiled through the land

Yet there was one who challenged all
Defying nature’s laws
A nasty wyvern, foul and cold
With sword-like teeth and claws
A serpent head atop its neck
Its eyes of onyx sheen
And down its back a boney ridge
In wretched stains of green

On four legs through the brush it tramped
With howl and eerie wail
At fullest stretch six horses long
From snout to scaly tail
Chaos, decay and death it brought
Rai’sheen they named the blight
For baleful was this creature’s heart
Murder, its trail, and fright

Rai’sheen on Ysis’ plains did roam
Unbound, hungry and free
And in despair Lyvinel’s elves
Did for a hero plea
Yet far and wide not many dared
To face the hellish beast
For on the foolish few that did
The wyvern fiend would feast

But there was one, an elf named Shey
Much different from the rest
The greatest swordsman in the realm
A bearer of the crest
An adept sorcerer indeed
Apprentice to the source
This elf did wield a blade and staff
With unrelenting force

Yet none would share the keen elf’s zeal
The masters least of all
For this young elf a lady was
Not muscular nor tall
Against the odds she set out though
To prove her bravery
To slice the wyvern’s rigid throat
And kill rank bigotry

Along the shady trees Shey swept
With purpose but no plan
With heavy packs and burly sacks
Through bush and scrub she ran
Though ev’ry corner of these woods
Were etched in this elf’s mind
The wyvern’s cave, Shey realized
She knew not where to find

With luck and glee Shey then recalled
Her former magic guide
A druid elf who North of Llev
Did all alone reside
Surely the wise man knew the way
She’d have to bid his aid
So of a lasting amity
The young elf gravely prayed

The woods grew dense forebodingly
As Shey battled through thorn
Yet willed she reached the old man’s home
Her clothing soiled and torn
The druid’s house was but a shack
Concealed ‘midst leaf and vine
And as she neared stepped out a man
As weathered as benign

The druid beamed from ear to ear
Pleased with such occasion
Though strife was all that Shey would bring
This hermit’s isolation
With grand allure she begged the man
To help her in her quest
And to the old man’s worried face
She spoke with charm and zest

After some time the druid caved
For Shey would not relent
He reached into his buckskin pouch
With all but clear content
He looked the young elf up and down
Eyes wide in reprimand
But once Shey swore her secrecy
Withdrew his shaky hand

A crow-black stone lay in his palm
That swirled with creamy haze
With each sunray it sparkled bright
And drew Shey’s awe-struck gaze
The druid’s fingers wrapped its shell
As sparks danced through the air
He closed his lids and asked the stone
Of Rai’sheen’s unseen lair

“A hidden cave,” came the reply,
“Where none have gone before
East-wards beyond the forest’s reach
Along the coastal shore”
The stone went dull, its power spent
Crumbling like ashen snow
Shey thanked the man with all her heart
And fast away did flow

For days and nights Shey journeyed on
Due East ‘cross copse and plain
Without a rest she spanned Ysis
Through wind and frost and rain
But on the 12th day then at last
The cavern came in reach
And Shey did smirk for the moral
The elves of Llev she’d teach

She sheathed her blade and ground the steel
Latching her armor plate
Shey meditated deep and clear
In bond with chance and fate
Dropping her bags unto the ground
She raised her shield and sword
A few last words climbed high above
In prayer to the Lord

The moon seemed as a silver coin
Framed in a silken sheet
For light vanished beyond the hills
In splendid mauve retreat
The ocean spray reached for the sky
As frothy waves hit rock
Tough gusts of wind tore at Shey’s cloak
And pierced the cloth with mock

Yet Shey bit all the sting away
Unwavering and strong
Her pace did speed with new resolve
To prove her masters wrong
With sturdy strides she neared the cave
The entrance slowly grew
As a mere step then from her fate
Her courage briefly flew

A mighty roar rung through the night
Rai’sheen’s rank feeding sound
It stirred and quaked the boiling earth
Taking Shey to the ground
Severely shook the young elf rose
Regrouping all her dare
And with a madly drumming heart
Entered the wyvern’s lair

Engulfed in black the elf did tread
Chasing a putrid smell
An orange glow cast dancing shades
As darkness slowly fell
Down twisting digs Shey stepped, alert
Across the stones with deft
Until the tunnel lastly led
Into a bright-lit cleft

A pair of flashing eyes did stare
Through Shey with wicked mock
The wyvern sat, nostrils aflare
Atop a massive rock
It fletched its teeth and billowed loud
As heat waves reached for Shey
The elf jumped wide and rolled aside
Out of the fire’s way

Magma did run where just before
The dashing elf had stood
As more flame roils licked at Shey’s shield
And charred the crafted wood
The wyvern pounced at Shey with speed
And snapped its awesome jaw
It whipped its emerald tail and struck
Shey with a single claw

Smitten with rage Shey’s blade did fly
Unchained of all remorse
While from her mouth flowed ancient words
Of potent arcane source
She leapt towards the wyvern beast
Circled by magic charm
A steely tip touched supple flesh
And stirred shrieking alarm

The wyvern rolled from side to side
In squirms of dire pain
Thick coils of crimson snaked its neck
Choking the sinful bane
Through ev’ry corner of the caves
A beastly loud wail rung
As Shey trailed up the wyvern’s flank
And cut the creature’s tongue

The deed was done, Rai’sheen no more
Brought down by elvish steel
And in respect by its stiff head
Shey il Fyel did kneel
She sighed and thanked the Gods above
For granting divine might
Shey sheathed her blade and left the caves
Out into the cool night

The woods did smile at the small elf
The animals did cheer
The skies looked down in harmony
Banished the ghost of fear
The lands were free and safe once more
And all things living thrived
Of death and dread the elves removed
For all times forth deprived

Shey did return through Lyvinel
With head and spirit high
The greatest elf that ever lived
Greeted by festive cry
All of Llev gathered in delight
To drink and laugh and sing
As all spoke joy and words of praise
To Llev’s first heroine


Notes:

Crest – Crest of roses, a mark of high elvish pure-blood
Ilén – Short for Ilén Messilieth, the race of high elves
Llev – (Pronounced yev) Glorious canopy fortress of the elves, burnt down during the Cloud Wars but later rebuilt in full glory on the forest ground
Lord – Boreanil, Lord of the Forest.
Lyvinel – Woodland realm of the elves
Mark – Beginning of Ysis’ new age, when Life banished Death into the Otherworld; see also Winter’s Fate, Summer’s Bane
Messilieth – Elves
Rai’sheen – Literally black heart, also known as the king of wyverns; a beast of myth that ravaged the world of Ysis
Source – Sometimes referred to by men as kametica, a powerful flow of magic power that is rumored to originate in the Otherworld and can be yielded by the pure and gifted on Earth
Shey il Fyel – (Pronounced shai il fell) Legendary queen of the elves
Ysis – World inhabited by the Elves along with a great many other species and races

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15 May 2004:-) Becca Lusher
*looks up* I swear Joelle's psychic or something, plus she definitely gives Ol'Father Time some serious backhanders, not that i'm complaining ^_^

Right well i can't give too great a comment on this as someone was distracting me while i was reading *beady eyes*
But i love the feel of it, definitely a minstral tale, and the fact that the hero was a women did not go unnoticed.

You're really starting to build up the history to this world, which is just great, the more the merrier i say.

The only problem with epic poetry (and why i never write it) is it takes so long! Why sweat and slave over poetry when you can scribble down prose, i say, but then that's because i'm secretly green eyed monster over those who pull it off ...

Nice one ^_~

13 Adrian H. Wood replies: "I know, Joelle's beginning to scare me actually...I've got this sneaky suspiscion that she's got connections to the MOD underground - or perhaps she really is psychic!

Oh yeah um, I didn't mean to distract you from reading but I just had to whinge to someone about my stupid work and exams 12

You're quite right with your comments about epic poetry, it's such a pain in the ass and I think I'm fed up with poetry as such for the time being. Back to Winter's Fate and a few other nifty tales I'm working on then... Hehe, be afraid, very afraid.

Thanks for reading, youze a darling!"
15 May 200445 D Joelle Duran
Bravo! *applauds*
A delightful telling with a catchy and enjoyable meter. Nice work--though I can see how doing a poem that long could be quite tough.

Just one typo: "Who’s gallantry and steely nerve"
Who's should be Whose.

Again--good work. It really has the feel of a epic a minstrel would sing. =)

1 Adrian H. Wood replies: "Wow I'm in awe, it's the speedy one again lol! Ooh damn those little spelling mistakes that always creep in...re-reading it now I think there's also quite a few problems with the meter but overall I guess it works 12

Thanks a lot for your kind words again, I'm glad you liked this because it took bloody ages, hehe. You must be the most reliable commenter in the world (TM)! Thanks again"
16 May 2004:-) Jeff Burke
(Sigh) Adrian, Adrian, Adrian...

I never thought that YOU, of all people, would be a feminist. I had such high hopes...

No, just kidding. The whole "power to the Double X" thing is really neat. Oh, by the way: You completely gave away a certain little fact about the boy in WFSB...(cough, cough)

Also, there are elves in Ysis? DANGER: do not, I repeat, do NOT stick to the "fab four." Elves, Men, Dwarves, Dragons. I already see Elves, Men, and Dragons...

It was cool when Tolkien did it, not so much now, fifty years and millions of books later. Throw in something new, like talking insect people, or...OH! How 'bout an actual race of semi-good werewolves?

Think of the emotional damage one of those characters could have! Just think of it!

Um... I think, emphasis on think, that "boney" is spelled "bony." Yeah, definitely "bony"

Nicely done, though I have to say that sometimes the rhythm was a bit weird.

J. Atlas Burke

P.S. The movies topic is officially dropped.

12 Adrian H. Wood replies: "Thanks for the thumbs up and the crits, I'll sort the 'bony' out right away and yeah, I know some of the meter doesn't work. Ah well, poetry is so hard! I can't be bothered with it any more.

What did I give away about Darien though? You mean the thing about the 'source'? That's already in my overview of Ysis... But no worries about the races, right now what I have lined up is: lots of different human races, high elves, dark elves, a race of half human underwater creatures, dwarves, no dragons (only drakes exist which are the much smaller descendants), plus an abundance of critters, monsters and such goodies as enchanted animals, wereanimals etc. Hope that's a bit better for you? I just didn't want to go too crazy and stay true to traditional fantasy rather than mutate to science fiction having man-high talking insects or something, haha.

Alright well, thanks a lot for reading mate!"
8 Jun 200445 Wolf
*Puts down story, takes 10 deep breaths, reaches below the table and pulls out large dwarven battle axe and walks to the door hmming an old dwarven drinking song. closes door behind her. hear a high pitched scream (ad) mad laugh (wolf) a swish (battle axe) and a thump (ad's head).* "that will teach you for being so damn good!"

21 Adrian H. Wood replies: "*Aaaaaaarrrrrrrrr* Like the guy in Austin Powers said: "That really, really hurt!". Oh well, no worries, at least now my stupid brain will stop torturing me. Hold on, I still need it for my last uni exam tomorrow though! D'oh!! Ah never mind.. who needs a brain for a psychology paper anyways...

Holy cow, I just realized this is my 250th anniversary comment! Wow, that means I better go write something for you as thanks... any preferences? How ironic - you killed me and now I'm even rewarding you for it, lol."
9 Jun 200445 Wolf
Just something where the dragon isnt evil but basically just write like you always do coz thats great!!! i love you poems but i love winters fate summers bane to so no worries i love it all!!!12

1 Adrian H. Wood replies: "  Alright, I'll see what I can cook up *Walks into the kitchen*"Hey Mogrem, where have you hidden the sugar?"

Oh, any preference as to whethere it should rhyme or something?"
10 Jun 200445 Wolf
If poem defiantly rhyme if not well no worries but i love your poems coz they got rhyme and rhythm!!!

:-) Adrian H. Wood replies: "Ok *abides obediently* *runs of to write poem* "Hurry thee my muse, duty calls upon us!""
26 Jun 200445 The Doctor doktor@die...de>
Hey Adrian,

just read this little poem on www.drachental.de and thought: Wow, this is freakin' awesome!
It's more exciting than half of the normal fantasy stories you can read on the net and it keeps its rhymes and its meter throughout the whole ballad - respect!
And I thought most of the writers in the net didn't know what a proper meter and content-matching rhymes were...
I say it is by far one of the best fantasy poems I've read in the Internet till now.

Great work, keep it up!

1 Adrian H. Wood replies: "Wow thanks for the flattery! I didn't think anyone from Drachental would bother reading my stuff.. turns out I thought wrong 12 There's lots of great poets over here on Elfwood though, you should give them a try! Some really fantastic poetry, if that's what you're in to. Do you have any stories up on Drachental yourself? I'd love to check them out.

Oh, and by the way: Eigentlich können wir uns ja auch auf Deutsch unterhalten wenn dir das lieber ist 12 "
15 Dec 2004:-) JM Larsson
Absolutely magnificent. A female protagonist, without an overly feminist air...very fresh. Excellent rhyming and meter, although I agree their are a few bugs. None are especially annoying, and poetry IS hard. I have never succeeded in writing a truly disciplined meter and been completely happy with it. *ich*

But this...deserves more praise than I can think of right now.

*leaves a keg of th' good stuff for some fine work*

:-) Adrian H. Wood replies: "Yeah meter is one of those things the world could do without if you ask me! But thanks ever so much for reading the whole thing *Sips on keg of good stuff... cringes* Not what I need after a week of partying lol! I'll store this one for later 12"
24 Apr 200745 Kii
Woah. That was the awesomest poem ever
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