| 18 Jan 2003 |  E. Hanna |  Loading...Whoops, double comment. They say it brings good luck (but I didn't do it intentionally).  Megaera Callisto Lorenz replies: "Well, I'm happy to take good luck however it comes at me. " | |
| 18 Jan 2003 | E. Hanna | Loading... The first comment is always very exciting, so let me tell you right away what I thought of 'Millie'. I've read the first two chapetrs and they were-- to use a local twist of Canadian prairie dialect-- AWESOME!!! You've got style, theme, characterization, and plot rolling along and gaining momentum. Superb.
An artist too? you skilled devil. And the classics? You've got it going on. If you like Chinese philosophy but never concentrated on the military read Sun Tzu's "Art of War"- it's short, available online, and brilliant.
Well, as you can see, I am thoroughly enjoying this neck of the woods. I will be back and back soon. | |
| 18 Jan 2003 | E. Hanna | Loading... The first comment is always very exciting, so let me tell you right away what I thought of 'Millie'. I've read the first two chapeters and they were-- to use a local twist of Canadian prairie dialect-- AWESOME!!! You've got style, theme, characterization, and plot rolling along and gaining momentum. Superb. An artist too? you skilled devil. And the classics? You've got it going on. If you like Chinese philosophy but never concentrated on the military read Sun Tzu's "Art of War"- it's short, available online, and brilliant. Well, as you can see, I clearly like this neck of the woods. I will be back and back soon. Megaera Callisto Lorenz replies: "Wow, thanks, E.! I really appreciate your kind comments. Yep, I'll definitely check into Sun Tzu. Oh, and thanks for the link from your page . . . I'll link to you as well, as soon as I can to updating my bio. I'm so glad to have met a kindred spirit here in Wyvern's!" | |
| 21 Jan 2003 | E. Hanna | Loading... I've finished your compelling narrative, excellent. The tension and character are very well established, also the writing stays true to the Victorian form. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for the Library : > Megaera Callisto Lorenz replies: "Thanks, E.! It may be a while before I come up with any new material, but I will be sure to let you know. " | |
| 30 Jan 2003 |  Jeanette 'Mus' deBoer | Loading... Whoa. Disturbing. Tis the only word I can think of to describe your story. I must compliment you on your ability to write. Very few writers here can make me feel like 'Oh my word, what a horrendous story... so why can't I stop reading?' Amazing. Wonderful emotion, and yes, it was scary. Excellent work! Megaera Callisto Lorenz replies: "Thanks so much, Jeanette! I'm so glad the story had the right effect. I've always wanted to write a good spine-chiller . . ." | |
| 17 Feb 2003 |  Sarah Colley | Loading... Oh, a lover of the Armana period! ::looks through her work and pouts:: You do not have any pieces up based on Egypt? I am dissapointed! I was so excited when I read your bio, thought maybe there was someone else out there writing stories set in Egypt. <P> If you do decide to put some of them up, please let me know! <P> And of course, what you do have up is wonderful, great job with the characters and the flow is excellent. | |
| 7 Nov 2004 |  A 7th grade kid from NH | Loading... Just so you know, you are basically my new idol!! I got to your gallery thingie through Heptune.com, and I think you are a really good artist and writer. | |
| 28 Dec 2004 |  Louise Boucher | Loading... Hi, I must get around to reading your stories as thanks for the lovely picture of Rhonwyn and Haydain. I'll stop by soon to add my comments. | |
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