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Melanie J. Teichroeb

"Fallen Angel" by Melanie J. Teichroeb

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This idea for a poem just came to me one day, and I had to write it :) Enjoy :P OMG I just found out yesterday that this poem is gonna be published by the International Library of Poetry! Thanks, poetry.com! ^_^ 07/24/03
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Once I flew so freely through,

The yonder skies so deeply blue.

On pearly wings of merry feather,

Soaring through all types of weather.

 

Viewed the world from up above,

Sent it down my purest love.

Saw the hills from miles high,

Me, the angel of the sky.

 

The world, it glitters like a jewel,

They say the earth can speak to you.

One night in a horrid dream,

A demon came and spoke to me.

 

He said that he was not my foe,

He came to bring me naught of woe.

This demon told me glorious things,

Of shining gems and golden rings.

 

Of riches lost from days of yore,

Hiding beyond a silver door.

And I believed him, like a fool,

I became the demon’s tool.

 

I grew to be consumed by greed,

Never once did I take heed,

Of the changes that began to fall,

Lost inside my hungry lull.

 

A monster was what I become,

The thought today still makes me numb.

Full of evil, lust, and hate,

Causing sorrow did elate.

 

My wings are torn from my blades,

Eyes of black; no longer jades.

From my black heart, I do cry,

A fallen angel am I.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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22 Oct 200345 Final Heaven
U said my name!? But why my stinkin lil town that u live in too!? Huh? Huh? Huh??????? Yeah... So there! They can stalk u 2! Oi vey you guys are bombarding my comment list...LOL
22 Oct 200345 Britty.M.
MeLLy how DARE YOU blah ME!!!!!!!!!!HEHEHEHEHE BLAH =D
22 Oct 200345 Final Heaven
Say my name britty!!!!!!!!! Pwease *starts 2 cry* NO CRYING ALLOWED HERE! *sets up anti-crying gun* HAHA >-)
22 Oct 200345 Britty.M.
BlahBlah Right...blah blah blah...
22 Oct 200345 Final Heaven
Oh come on brittany! U know my name now say it!!!! .......Ok????????? lol man you guys are bombarding my thinger...o well! *hums to herself*
22 Oct 200345 Final Heaven
yeah mel... u r a star!!!! OMG OMG! sign me an autograph?!?!?!?!? PWEASE! Um...sure...bring a pen this way...
23 Oct 200345 Carolyn
This is a very beautiful poem. It is very well done. You are extremly talented! Congratulations on being published!

Carolyn (final heavens mom) Well, thank you very much! I am extremely happy about being published (although I'm not completely sure they are putting me in their book yet.) Thanks very much for such a nice comment!*HI FINAL HEAVEN'S MOM!* 2
30 Apr 2004:-) Tasha-Ann N. Torres
Wow! That was awesome! I love it! Omg! I'm putting up a poem on my site about a fallen angel but it's not like this one. This poem is awesome though! Congrats on being published! I had a poem published by them...maybe I will put it up soon...

1 Melanie J. Teichroeb replies: "Thanks very much! This poem just hit me one night and had to be written down =D I want to read your poem! I'm sure it's great ^^ Heh, it's true that I was supposedly published by them..but it feels like a scam to me ._. I gotta read your work ^_^"
17 Sep 200545 Binx
Hey, your poem was awesome! No mistakes! Cool. Anyways, your adjectives fit your subject well and your rhyming was flawless. Good job. Keep up your awesome work!
14 Nov 2008:-) Scarlet Victoria Grimm
Really nice poem! It was really great. The story is so tragic. You should make a short story out of it. (I suppose in a way it is a short story, but whatever.) Anyway, it’s great for all us angel obsessed freaks out here.
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About 'Fallen Angel':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Melanie J. Teichroeb
 • Copyright: ©Melanie J. Teichroeb. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Angel, Demon, Wings, Fly, Greed, Evil
 • Categories: Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy
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