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Melanie J. Teichroeb

"The Eclipse" by Melanie J. Teichroeb

SF&F Picture 3 out of 8 by Melanie J. Teichroeb
 
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The title is self-explanitory :) Hope you like ^^;;
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The warrior is chilled to the bone,

Nervous even.

She ties her hair back

And prepares to fight.

Her armor is reinforced

With powerful rock, not steel.

Her sword is a moonbeam,

And she holds stars to throw.

With a fearful eye she turns

To gaze upon her foe.

Bright armor flashing,

A shield of flame firm in grasp,

Her enemy prepares to leap.

Sword clashes on shield,

Battle cries tear the air,

And it appears she is winning.

An unexpected blow!

The warrior is down!

Ultimately her foe is stronger.

She is beaten.

She throws down her glove

And is swept into darkness.

Is this the end?
Nay say I!

But she will fight many more battles,

And this shall remain her fate forevermore.

←- Captured Innocence | Fallen Angel -→

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28 Apr 2004:-) Tasha-Ann N. Torres
That was very interesting! Good job!

1 Melanie J. Teichroeb replies: "Thanks! ^_^"
17 Jun 200545 Anonymous
That was an excellent discription of a battle seen.(:
5 Nov 2005:-) Leandri Klopper
Oooo, nice. Quite the ending, full of drama. I like it, yes. I think I like it very much.
Well done!

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About 'The Eclipse':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Melanie J. Teichroeb
 • Copyright: ©Melanie J. Teichroeb. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Moon, Sun, Battle, Eclipse
 • Categories: Fights, Duels, Battles, Warrior, Fighter, Mercenary, Knights, Paladins
 • Views: 197


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