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Melanie J. Teichroeb

"The log of a pine" by Melanie J. Teichroeb

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Just a cute lil concept about a tree with a diary, or 'log' :P (pardon the pun!) And enjoy ^^;;
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Dear Log:

 

Wow! I can’t believe I finally got a diary for my birthday! I am so excited to be writing in you for the very first time! Mom looked so ashamed in me when I told her that I<br> wanted one with LOTS of paper so I would never run out. Can’t figure out why. But she went<br> out and got you for me anyway. I can’t wait to write all my adventures in here so<br> I’ll never forget! So far today, nothing much has happened to me, but I’m sure that’ll<br> improve soon. I have got to go to sleep for now. See you tomorrow!

 

Dear Log:

 

As I watch the sun set today, it reminds me of my lousy day. (Sounds almost poetic, doesn’t it?) This morning, I was just enjoying the peacefulness of what looked like was going to be a beautiful day, when there was a major cloudburst and it poured! Oh, did it pour. You’d think the great god, Zin, was crying her darn eyes out! (Oh, Zin is the god we worship who lives up in the sky, just to let you know, Log). And I can’t forget that lovesick elven couple who decided they just HAD to recite poems in MY shade! I was okay with it at first, but after about half a sunrise of “Kiss thine feet, thy love so sweet” I had about enough. Dropping a couple of branches on their blonde heads was sufficient to teach them a lesson. What a laugh I had to see them flee so! Well, all this effort of writing is completely wearing me out, but I feel better. See you later.

 

Dear Log:

 

Nothing much to say at the moment, besides that I had a wonderful day! The pools of rain from yesterday nourished a bunch of my brothers and sisters, those weak little saplings at my feet. Oh, I know I’m naught but a young tree myself, but I’m older than all of them by at least 30 years. Of course, I am no bullying big brother, not like that fir tree I can see from my perch on top of Mushroom Hill (hey, the elves named it…don’t laugh at me!) But this day wasn’t just good because my family got fed…oh, no. I have a major enemy, a neighboring oak tree, who has been threatening to overrun my part of the hill for months now. Overrun it with a bunch of her pesky children! I really dislike oak…they think they own the forest and everything in it. But anyway, a legion of those bloodthirsty dwarves showed up in the forest. Apparently they need to build more wooden weapons, because they hacked down the oak! It shook me up a bit, but in the end I was glad because I am a proud pine, while she is just a lowly oak. But enough of this writing. I am growing weary yet again. See you tomorrow, perhaps.

 

Dear Log:

 

I am entirely freaked out. Lately, I have been noticing some odd-looking buds growing all over my branches. A fungus, perhaps, or some weird-looking flowers? Anyway, these buds have been growing on me for a long, long time, but I’ve been too busy to notice. They are really funny things. They are brown, spiky, and hard. I do not know what to make of them. A small relief is that many of them have fallen off to rest on the ground below. Maybe later I will ask mom what they are. Forgive me for making this such a short entry, but recently there have been rumors of dragons from the east planning to torch down the nearby elven village of Merywood, which would mean certain doom for us. I’ve not had proper sleep in days, as I have been sick with worry. Well, maybe I can rest tonight and forget all of this in my dreams. Goodbye for now.

 

Dear Log:

 

It’s awful! Thoroughly devastating! You know how I described the warring eastern dragons? Well, they have gone through with their deed. Merywood is finished. Burned to the ground. And the forest around with it. Fire has completely engulfed the forest and everything living in it, and flames are beginning to lick at my hill. I do not want to die this way! But, I leave this as a final entry as the smoke obscures the sun and the fairies fly for their lives…goodbye, Log. Thanks for being such a good listener. Maybe in the future, when they sort through the ashes, they will find you and remember me. Goodbye…

 

Too bad the pine didn’t know how fast paper burns, eh?

 

 

 

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5 Jul 200345 B.a. lollie
This was, without a doubt, one of the most unique stories I have ever read. To begin with, I was like, "Wha....?" But as I read, I actually begin to wonder what was going to happen to the pine! It was good...keep up the good work.

Oh, by the way, first comment....yay! 19)

1 Melanie J. Teichroeb replies: "why thank ya kindly! yup...i was just sittin around one day, thinkin "i need a UNIQUE story!" and this came to me ^_^ *waves* pine went bye bye! 10 thanks so much for commenting! ^^"
15 Jul 2003:-) Patricia (Trish ) L Harper
Hey that was really cute! I was hoping that the pine tree wouldn't get burned, but aww well. Great story keep it up. hehe i know...i shouldnta put such a mean twist on the end...but i just had to XD thanks for commenting! ^_^
14 Aug 200345 Miguel Francis Ettema
If you had omitted that last line from the tale, and rather replaced it with a *subtle* reminder of the fact that the log is made of something rather flammable, I would have given you two thumbs up 2 As a result, I'll give you one thumb and a pinkie instead... it's an original short story that has the potential to just that bit better 12 Alas, 'tis true...the more I read this story, the more it displeases me...but thanks for the one and a quarter thumbs up! 10
22 Oct 200345 Final Heaven
poor pine! why did u have to die!! *bawls eyes out*

mel, that was sooooo unique! i would have never thought of anything like that! I didn't get it at first but as i neared the end i began to understand. i really liked the pun 2! LOL thanks! hmm...maybe I was visiting Mushroom Hill when I came up with this weird one o_O LOL jkjk
22 Oct 200345 Britty.M.
poor poor poor little tree that was so sad...yet funny too =D *dances around screaming* MeLLy, MeLLy, MeLLy

1 Melanie J. Teichroeb replies: "heehee....THANKS! BRITTY BRITTY BRITTY"
22 Oct 200345 Britty.M.
Yo MeLLy
Dat was good, it was your own,
thats what made it great
KeepItUpKidd=P
Fr.Britty2 I will I will! =) Merci =P
27 Oct 200345 Britty.M.
*opens an umbrella* it was cute again i say BAHAHAHA
4 Jan 2004:-) Emma O Reilly
Wow, I'm impressed! That was funny...you get the feeling that the tree is a teenager - y'know, with the whole thing with the leaves coming..Well done. I like this a lot!

1 Melanie J. Teichroeb replies: "^^ Thanks! Yeah, I was kinda thinking that meself when I wrote this 10"
27 Feb 2004:-) Leia Anne Getty
That was a very original and well written story. Kudos!

22 Melanie J. Teichroeb replies: "ACK! I am so sorry...I didn't even notice someone had commented here ._. THANKS! ^_^"
8 Jan 2005:-) Sarah M. Durtschi
I could have SWORN I've commented on this! oh well, I must have thought of commenting on it but didn't.

It's a really creative idea that you have for this story! I really liked it!

keep doing what you do!
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About 'The log of a pine':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Melanie J. Teichroeb
 • Copyright: ©Melanie J. Teichroeb. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Tree, Pine, Dwarves, Elves, Dragons, Log, Cute
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Elf / Elves, Fights, Duels, Battles, Humourous or Cute Things, Dwarf, Dwarves
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