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Yuki Erika Radcliffe

"Eyes of an Angel" by Yuki Erika Radcliffe

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so... there's this human and this angel. they love eachother, but the angel's family thinks that humans are inferior. the war between angels and demons rages on down on earth, and the humans get caught up in it. the angel dies to save the human's life, but the human then kills himself, and their spirits meet in the afterlife, and the angel is mad at him becasue she died to save him and he wasted his life. they get back together in the next life. this also goes with the 'silver thread' and 'silver moon' stories that have not been uploaded yet, and will not be for a while. unless people bug me about it. then i'll submit a mediocre outline of the story and leave it at that until i get it done.
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Eyes of an Angel.

I stand before an angel, dark,

As dark as the pitch black sky at night,

Yet pale as that silver orb,

Pure shadow around a shining light.

It shines upon your features, bright,

Your beauty, in its respective way

Is perfect, though your gentle love

Is painful as the light of day.

It left me with a price to pay,

To fight alone, although I try

To bring myself to just forget

The light that shines behind your eyes.

And for your life, I’d gladly die,

And in return, a single kiss

Is all I ask, what I receive,

The silent laughter from your lips.

But still, I’m frozen in your midst,

While you weep woeful tears of blood,

I stand by, I can only watch,

Drifting in the sanguine flood.

A single rose begins to bud,

And likewise, we begin to grow,

Although our paths lead us apart,

It comes as no surprise, I know.

With crimson heat, your body glows,

Despite the warmth, I feel a chill

Creep up my spine, we’re out of time,

With no more than a simple thrill.

With just the strength drawn from my will,

We live a brief infinity,

A fleeting lifetime, a lasting instant,

In chaos, in serenity.

With stronger a love than enmity,

In my eyes, you’re a beauty, true,

But if beauty is in the eyes of the beholder,

Then what kind of beast am I to you?

 

←- Even angels die | Fly Away... -→

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5 Oct 2003:-) Natassja Linder
This poem is too moving for a first comment dance... Only an Elf could (maybe) perform a dance to fit this poem. It does pose some very interesting questions and it makes you stop and think for a while...

17 Yuki Erika Radcliffe replies: ""You're not dancing? YOU'RE NOT DANCING?! Fine, then, I will have to dance for you." ::Yuki does the first comment dance, then notices that people are staring:: "What? No one else was going to...""
7 Oct 2003:-) Zan07
i liked it! -^^- *does da second comment dance* -^^- MWEE HEE! good job! *hug-tackle-pounces*

:-) Yuki Erika Radcliffe replies: "Kyaaaaaaa! I've been hugged/tackled/pounced! Oh, why?! (Thanx for dancing. You've made me so happy. *sob...* I wuv you...)"
30 Nov 2003:-) Christina Lee
*does the 3rd comment dance* Woohoo!!! What a great poem! I love your "beauty is in the eye of the beholder" line! Awesome!!! ^_^
23 Feb 2004:-) Karin Schadinger
Wonderful Work! It's great!
28 Aug 200445 Cait
Does the Cait-Comment dance because...well, because. Because I'm not first. So there. 12
15 Jan 2005:-) Esmeralda Eli
This poem is so amazing! I loved how it flowed and the story it told. I loved it! Especially the ending, so brilliant. *shakes finger at you* How dare you! You're holding out on us! I would LOVE to see the other work you have on this subject!You think I'm... holding out on you guys?But I'm not...waitaminute... *checks little red book full o' stuff*you know, you're right. I haven't submitted half the stuff I have here.of course, most of it isn't really suitable to be posted on elfwood, there are certain regulations that I must follow. and my work, frankly, may not be read by you people, so many of whom are underage ;Pso my sincere apologies, I can't post the stuff. you know what else I forgot? *Hugs Esmerelda*my work here is done.*goes off to find another person to hug*I hate that the replies here can't be divided into paragraphs, that would be really nice, y'know?
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About 'Eyes of an Angel':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Yuki Erika Radcliffe
 • Copyright: ©Yuki Erika Radcliffe. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Eyes, Angel, Human, Love, Suicide, Beholder
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Romance, Emotion, Love
 • Views: 226


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