SciFi & Fantasy Fiction and Stories by Milla Lindqvist

Yay! first comment. I red thr first chapter and I can totally imagine your world that you created. Good work!

Milla Lindqvist replies: "Wow. Considering I hardly even described the world...anyways, thanks."

Well, I've read the first three chapters which is to your credit because I can rarely finish most things I read in elfwood (no offense to my fellow writers...I have ADD and it takes alot to interest me). I like the story so far and look forward to future installments here in the Wood, though you sometimes use words that I find only serve to confuse the flow of your style and don't really enhance the experience. They say focus first on story, and then on the grammar and style of your piece. You can always develop technical skills, however the hardest part is to get the ideas on paper, as I'm sure you already know!
Other than that, I'll be looking forward to reading your published works in the future!

Milla Lindqvist replies: "Getting the ideas down is definitely the most difficult! Mostly for lack of time at the moment. Though since it iced today and there is no school I may get some writing done. Thanks, you're very optimistic, it's encouraging!"

I like your work and I am surprised no one else has commented. In any case your stories have quite the compelling narrative. I'd definitely be interested to see works other than Wild Honour (Canadian Spelling). Seeing as you like Star Trek I wish you Qua'Pla!

Milla Lindqvist replies: "Well, thanks. I don't think much anything other than Wild Honor will go up in Wyvern's because most everything else I write with intent to publish. I haven't watched Star Trek since this summer aaaaa withdrawal...anyways."

I read Wild Honor, it was rather good, although they're a few things I want to nag about because I can. Deserts are usually referred to as seas strangely enough, so I would change 'dunetop' to 'crest' and whatever else -- this is purely stylistic however, so you needn't feel pressured to do anything to change it. Also, if you're aiming for a omniscient narration, you might want to stray from the slang ('helping out', etc) because usually that's something characteristic of first-person narration. You might also care to explain the animals a bit more; maybe I am spoiled by Herbert's appendices. Anyway, keep up the good work.

Milla Lindqvist replies: "I'll add appendices when I'm done, God knows I've made up enough random stuff about the elves to fill them with I don't elaborate too much on the animals because Sares knows what they are. As for the slang...I am torn. It's almost first-person anyways because it's very much from Sares's POV, I just don't like actual first person. Anyways, this is long. Thanks PS. I know who you are..."

Hi Milla, I've just read chaper one, and it is fantastic. You have a great descriptive style, and I got hooked straight away, just reading about the firebeast, and by the use of elven language. Brilliant.

Milla Lindqvist replies: "thanks...the elven language will be changing sometime when i get around to it, though, cause it comes from a time when my sister and i thought we were writing about the same group of elves, but it turns out we each created a separate world, and so now i have to create my own elven language...so far i have one word which is Inuen, blizzard, and also the god of chaos, the rest i have yet to come up with "

Um. I haven't updated in ages. I'm sorry!! I'm blocked on Wild Honor, so there's naught that can be done look at my art and my comic instead, I *have* been working on those...