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Simone ´Moon´ v.d. Kaaij

"Escaping the Ghoul" by Simone ´Moon´ v.d. Kaaij

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I am running from the Ghoul but victory will be his and so I'll be doomed...
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Escaping the Ghoul

I am running as fast as I can

But I can still smell the breath of the Ghoul

Stealing the air from my lungs

I am to afraid of looking back

I am running as fast as I can

Running from his evil claws

I know that when he captures me

He'll rip the skin from my body

I am running as fast as I can

My feet are bleeding from the run

Leeving an easy trail to follow

Oh, I can hear him growl

I am running as fast as I can

But where to will this leed

There is no way of hiding

My blood betrayes me everywhere

I am running as fast as I can

But I gave up hope to survive

I can smell his scent of death

The Ghoul must be right behind me

I am running as fast as I can

But I know it has no use

I feel his dirty cold arms around me

He is so strong, I must give in

Now I am his slave for ever

He is leeving me no choise

His wish is my command now

I am doomed to satisfy


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15 Feb 200445 Elven princess of my world
Slightly freaky but very descriptive.
I love the atmosphere that this poem has, and in a way it is sooo believable!
That's why it's slightly freaky.

:-) Simone 'Moon' v.d. Kaaij replies: "Hi Saskia! I am glad to read I had succes with setting the atmosphere in this poem. It's based on the feeling of panic that can creep into your vains and make you shiver when you realise there is no way of running away from that what you fear so much. Hihi freaky is a nice compliment to me, it shows I hit the right tone with my poem. Thank you for your comment dear Elfwoodtraveller!"
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'Escaping the Ghoul':
 • Created by: :-) Simone ´Moon´ v.d. Kaaij
 • Copyright: ©Simone ´Moon´ v.d. Kaaij. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Body, Claws, Ghoul, Growl, Of, Rip, Skin, Slave
 • Categories: Ghosts, Ghouls, Aparitions, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 470

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