"Dry Torture *Updated!*" by Selene Moonshadow Green

...Lol her hair is bleeding Yes, I know that it’s just stained with blood, I just had to point that out.
Can’t you color over her tail? Prismacolors are highly capable of doing that, and you didn’t color very hard, so if you colored over it with a prismacolor it wouldn’t show any trace of the green...
This is good, but I think that it still has room for improvement. Example: her head seems kinda big for her body (yes, I know that she’s starved, but her head should still fit! And the face gets thin and sunken along with the body when someone is starved...) and her arms are really kinda... twig-like. No offense or anything, just constructive criticism! Still a great effort!

Selene Moonshadow Green replies: "Oh... well, it’s actually a comb that’s orange, but Photobooth messed it up.
What if I wanted a trace of green?
(lol) I know! It’s sooo hard to draw starving people... or mermaids, but part of it is photobooth!

Oh, and thanksys!"

Oh. Stupid Photobooth.
Just color lightly.
I never have to draw starving people, so I wouldn’t know
You’re welcomesies!

Selene Moonshadow Green replies: "YEAH!
Color... what lightly?
Oh, lol."

wow really love the hair color and emotion. but the arms aren’t kinda cemetrical. (ones bigger than the other) other than that. its a good pic.

Selene Moonshadow Green replies: "Oh, you;’re right! Thanks! (But you shoulda seen the first one... ugh. )"

You said, "What if I wanted a trace of green?" and I said "Just color lightly," meaning, if you color with a gentle hand on the tail it would leave a trace of green.
Maybe I should draw a starving person, just to try it out... well, whatever. I’m not sure if anyone in my book will starve yet; maybe Kat or Syna or one of the others will get really hungry, Ike doesn’t eat, but he can start to lose energy in a starving-like way if he is deprived of light for long enough (since Ike is the vessel of light, he gains energy off of light-- sunlight, moonlight, etc--so he doesn’t have to eat. He still has to drink, though, and sleep, though not as often as normal people, maybe like five hours a week).
Once again, getting carried away with my story! *sighs and rolls eyes*

Selene Moonshadow Green replies: "Wait... I’m confused now.. I already new that!
YAY STORY!"

I know, but you were the one who asked, I was just answering.
YEAH, GO MY STORY! I’m at school and Gabby and Alex are sitting next to me looking at Webkinz. I think that Webkinz is boring-- Elfwood is much better!

Selene Moonshadow Green replies: "What did I ask?
TiS AMAAAZING!
Webkinz... LAME! I totally agree with thou!"

Alex: It is but Lyla is a ***** for writing such a mean thing I love webkinz

Selene Moonshadow Green replies: "... Whoa kay then..."

Omg, just... never mind.
YUS!!! PAGE 96!!
Totally. Good thing Elfwood sensors, or you woulda had one big, nasty swear word on your page.

Selene Moonshadow Green replies: "Yeah... I woulda’ deleted it!"

Webkinz is quite childish, yes... *sniffs formally and sips from a cup of tea, pinky in the air*
Totally. I woulda too... Alex really needs to clean up her language.

Selene Moonshadow Green replies: "PINKY! lol..."

Tah! I wish I could do BRD this year... I can’t because there aren’t enough guys so in order to do it I have to ask a guy to do it, and I don’t think I much fancy that... *sighs longingly and hangs up BRD dresses in closet*

Selene Moonshadow Green replies: "*Stares angrily, then walks away*"

I’m sorry! *whimper, head and tail droop*
Btw, Selene, go to my page! I have 4 new pictures up!