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Mike ´Tig´ Murrieta

"Life" by Mike ´Tig´ Murrieta

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PATERN! PATERN!..Hehe. Ok..I have been reeeaaly POed latly so I have been writing depressing stuff..So sue me..life sucks..:P Live(c) Belongs to (c) Michael Murrieta, me!
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Life

Why me?
Why do I suffer?
Why can’t I crawl into a little ball and die?
God...can’t you hear my pleas?!
God?! Answer me!
...No response....
Why don’t you answer me?
Am I not you creation?
Why do my tears and cries not beseech?
Am I just a toy you look down on and laugh!?
AM I?!
..Still no response....
You have given us the gift of life yet you do not let us live.
Instead, have us suffer.
We are your toys aren't we?
You find fun with our pain.
Well who’s laughing now?!
HA HA HA!
My tears have faded and have ended your amusement.
Why so sad?
Your toy broke?
I look at it as an improvement.

←- Feelings... | My Last Chapter -→

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8 Mar 2004:-) Laura 'lozz' Jones
Gods is a sadist, he looks down on us and luaghs at us, the world is his dolls-house, he laughs at our so called religions and doenst help us, he finds pleasure in our mistakes;
eg, he could be a she.
I like this, its quite abrupt but still theres a good idea about the whole broken toy thing, are you one pf those ppl who try hard but cant seem to get anywhere/very far?
If u are then ditto for me.
Check out my stuff, its rubbish but it'll give u something to do...
Laters.
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About 'Life':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Mike ´Tig´ Murrieta
 • Copyright: ©Mike ´Tig´ Murrieta. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Depression
 • Categories: Celtic
 • Views: 197


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