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"The Legend of Blade: The Birth - Chapter One" by Josh ´Boo Boo´ Walls

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This is the first chapter of The Legend of Blade: The Birth. This chapter establishes a hint as to who each main character is and how he/she acts. It also shows my style and love for fights. PLEASE COMMENT!
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       Blade had made the treacherous trek to Goherda, the lowest valley in all of the world they came to call Adger., and halted his horse on the precipice that surrounded the dark city below.  His horse raised up on her hind legs as if scared of the place, seemingly knowing the dangers that were there-

       -not to mention the demons and God only knows what else he's been able to harness and tame.  I'm afraid I'll be walking; Streak doesn't seem to want to go down into Goherda, and I can't say that I blame her.  Poor girl, I probably won't see her again. - Blade thought to himself.

       Blade climbed off of his horse and stood there, stroking her mane as he spoke ever so softly into her white tipped ear, "Good-bye, Streak, have fun in the wild, enough for the both of us.  I probably won't be able to come back from this, but don't lose hope for me.  Good-bye."  With those words, he left go of her reins, allowing her to back up a few steps before turning her magnificently beautiful around and running away.  Blade, out of sorrow, watched, half hoping that she would change her mind and return to him, but he solemnly knew that he should go to the gates of Goherda.

       Finding a steep path the easiest and quickest way down, Blade Atmostrata began his descent down the crevice.  The path may have been the easiest, but it was still very difficult and fairly steep, nonetheless.  He pondered the thought of going after Streak for a while and he dropped from rock to rock.  It would make it easier on him, but he knew deep down that it would be harder for her to make the attempt than himself.  He dismissed the thought as he knew that she couldn't jump as far as he, from crevice to crevice.  The cold probably would have frozen her by now, too.  It seemed to be deathly cold, but he had left a desert like heat only fifty feet above or so.

       -Man it's c-c-cold.  And it's pretty dark, too - he thought to himself. -This would be easier if-

       -His thoughts froze as his body shuddered at the terrible bawl that had sounded.  Blade balanced himself evenly on the crevice at which he stood, preparing himself for an attack.  Reaching over his right shoulder, he drew a long sword from its sheath.  The black blade was looked almost invisible in the dim light and shadows.  Almost as cloaked as what he was looking at, straight into the eyes of an oversized bird, but it was different, strangely different.  Its eyes were a dark black, as if he were peering into large gaping holes at the forehead in place of the beads from which it would see.  The feathers had a look as though they had been melted together, or maybe it was the was its body radiated... evil.  Almost like a possessed griffin...

       His thought were yet again cut short as the beast sprung into action, leaping from its foothold above to land next to him on the little overhang on which he stood.  Blade had no time to think, instead he dove for the next crevice, trying to maneuver for more room.  The magnificent beast leapt off his perch and, instead of falling, it began to fly towards him.

       -It can fly!  I'm in trouble if I don't get to the bottom and fast.  Not good, not good at all, oh God, this isn't good.  Need more room to maneuver, need more room! - he cried in his mind.

       He dared to look down the cliff in a passing glance, only seventy feet or so to the bottom, but that was seventy too many.  He was jumping, desperate to reach the bottom, but was cut off by his flying foe.  Blade dared not to stop, instead aiming to push right past, but it was all in vain.  The massive claw slammed into his side, blowing him back into a wall of rock and dirt.  His ribs pulsated as it drew its claw back and pressed it into his chest.  Blade's breath began to fade along with the pain and cold as he felt himself slip into darkness...

       It howled again, as if to say it had won.  The incredible terror was enough to bring back to his senses.  His right hand had the feel of blood everywhere on it.  The claw was pressed tighter and tighter, as the other claw began to squeeze his right femur into the rocks.  Blade soon found he was pinned too tightly to free himself, and he swung he sword frantically with what little weight he was able to put behind it.  He raised it high over his head and dropped it down into the animal's offending calf on his chest.  The griffin hissed in pain, letting up as Blade pried himself loose.

       Blade knew it was a great risk, but he did it anyway.  If he didn't, he would die for sure.  Shoving his sword back into his holster, he jumped onto the steep slope, sliding down.  Blade shifted his weight as far back as he knew he could handle, but he struggled to keep from tumbling just the same.  He knew it before it happened, his feet betrayed him and he started to roll, banging his body with every bounce.  Only forty-five feet remained betwixt him and the bottom, and he was picking up tremendous speed-

       WHAAAAM!

       He knew he was at the bottom when his left side slammed into the ground harder than before, his descent ending.  His body wanted to stay there on the ground, and his mind jogged to take in everything that happened in the past few seconds-

       -The griffin! - Blade's mind yelled.

       Blade was on his feet, grabbing the hilt of his sword out of an instinct, and felt himself relaxing at the feel of the handle.  He sighed in relief as the griffin could be seen flying away to the north.  He collected himself and walked to the gate, with deep gratification of his ability showing through, only to disappear at the sight of the plaque beside the gate.  It had an insert for something, but that something was shaped like the indention he felt burning from the griffin's claw on his chest...

       "Press the griffin's claw to call back that demon's soul,
        Then watch in numb disbelief as the way may unfold;
        But beware of the grave consequence,
        As the castle arouses its defense."

       Blade wasn't sure about this "defense" but he knew he didn't want to run into it. The gut feeling told him otherwise, outweighing all of his other feelings. He was already pondering the claw print on his chest and wondering if he could even find the griffin...



       Doane was much pleased with the performance, though he wished it would have lasted a bit longer than the few seconds it took to unfold.  This game that he was playing  with Blade would have him running in circles and strengthening himself, physically, but not too much mentally, hopefully.  It was all a part of his plan to completely control Blade.  He sent Blade into a maze to collect the various orbs first-

       -Actually, it's more along the lines of absorbing them for their elemental power, so he can call his natural element for me... - Doane said in his mind.

       Doane had been standing on the castle wall, surprised that Blade hadn't noticed his presence.  He'd been there since he began his journey down.  Doane stretched his arms as Blade scaled the dark abyss, and he wasn't a bit surprised when he saw Rafael holding the reins of Blade's steed.  Rafael always messed up Doane's plans, but this time he wouldn't be able to, not with Blade on his side.  Rafael was born a fighter, but he wasn't stupid enough to fight both Doane and Blade; no one was.  After Rafael let Blade go without a second's worth of warning, Doane walked back toward the stairwell and down towards-

       -oh, what was her name?  Lisa?  No that's not it.  I can't seem to remember, but I do know that she's the reason Blade is playing my little game.  Her name is... Loretta?  No, it is Lelia.  Poor girl, she's just got to die, Blade needs to hurry so I can watch the slaughtering.  She'll barely survive beyond the inauguration.  She won't disappoint me, I hope. - Doane thought to himself.

       Doane was making his way down the stairs, casually holding his sword by the hilt with his left hand.  It was a habit, and it could pay off sometime.  A rigid voice sent a shiver up Doane's spine.  The owner was a tall, old man who loved to talk about his own strength and wisdom.  How could he have gotten behind Doane?  There were no doors so far down the spiraling staircase.  Doane respected his master, after all, he was appointed and chosen for him by Lucifer himself.  Why pick a worthless old man?

       "I'd like to start your lesson in a moment, after see the lady, of course.  Don't touch her just yet; you need to let Blade know first," Master spoke in an authoritative tone.

       "You fool, I don't want her.  She's a tool to lore Blade to me.  You know, bait?" Doane's sharp remark sprang forth at the sarcasm.

       "You had better watch who you call a fool.  After all, you are the one who needs teaching, if I remember correctly.  Now, go see your 'little miss pretty' and met me up on the crosswalk.  I want to see how good you are when you don't have any space-" Master began.

       Doane interrupted him strictly, "You teach me.  I'll know what you want when I get there with you.  As for now, I have an appointment to keep.  So, if you will excuse me."

       "As you wish, Lord Doane.  Pardon me for challenging your authority.  I will be waiting," he called as he turned and left.

       The two men went their separate ways.  Doane didn't like Master very much at all.  He came out of no where when he wasn't wanted, and when he was needed, he was never to be found.  But he needn't worry about that; Lucifer knew what he was doing.  For now he had to make a special appearance to... liven up a special guest.
←- The Legend of Blade: The Birth - Prologue | The Legend of Blade: The Birth - Chapter Two -→

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23 Dec 2003:-) Chelsea Castonguay
it just gets more diabolical as I read!! Two thing tho, in prologue you refer to Streak as a stallion, then in ch 1 you call her a her, only male horses can be stallions.
and maybe you'll get a mod's choice if your mods like your story! ok, its actually three things!
try to go to other writers libraries! Read some stuff, leave a few good comments and nicely ask them to visit you!! It can only help!

:-) Josh 'Boo Boo' Walls replies: "You know what? I never thought of calling Streak a stallion... oops, may fault! I'll fix that! It's a good thing it gets more diabolical, right? Oh and I try to visit plenty of galleries. Me a mod's choice? I dunno 'bout that..."
24 Dec 2003:-) Chelsea Castonguay
well, I never thought Falling Phoenix was good enough to be printed on a ceral box, much less deserve a mod's choice, but SURPRISE!!

:-) Josh 'Boo Boo' Walls replies: "I know, I know. I underestimate myself all the time. I have people that tell me to try to get published but... I'm not that up for taking chances..."
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About 'The Legend of Blade: The Birth - Chapter One':
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 • Created by: :-) Josh ´Boo Boo´ Walls
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 • Keywords: Blade, Goherda, Doane, Master, Lelia, Streak, Rafael, Desert, Griffin
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Fights, Duels, Battles, Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters
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