| 26 Oct 2004 | Ogambear | Loading...Indeed, NakedCelt, the inscription above the door would drive anyone insane trying to read it: how on earth did a runic inscription get into the Babylonian underworld? (chuckle) You've done a thorough and perceptive self-critique on this piece: I encourage you to do what you feel is needed. Give it your best attentions and we'll cheer you on gladly. Daniel D. Copeland (the Naked Celt) replies: "Ah, so you've been fooled by the angular letter forms into thinking it's Runic? (On reflection, though, you're right; pseudo-cuneiform would have been more appropriate.)" | |
| 3 Sep 2005 | Shavon K. Martin | Loading...The legs on the bowing victim seem slightly off, otherwise I say this is queit a lovly picture... or not a lovly picture? Well done, all and all. Quality. | |
| 6 Nov 2005 | Anonymous | Loading...It looks like it was drawn by a horny 12 year old to impress his friends during role playing games. Seriously, this is bad.
When you draw fantasy creatures you still need to make them look real. Out of proportion is one thing when you're doing it on purpose to make something look more non-human. When you're just off because you can't draw, like the legs of your whatever-they-are gaurds, you can tell. It's mostly the legs and feet. Mostly the feet.
Then there's the bit of lazy in the middle. I imagine it's smoke but really, it's just where you scribbled on the page. Is there some sort of reason why the smoke goes over toward the woman on the throne, rather than up? Or why the woman on her hands and knees is reaching into smoke but at an angle from the fire? I mean besides you wanting to draw a crotch shot.
Why are they burning a leopard? | |
| 9 Jun 2006 | Mecha | Loading...Dude, this is really bad. You claim to be a professional illustrator?! | |
| 10 Aug 2006 | Fiern | Loading...i think my favorite part of this picture are the bones in the firepit. Theyw ay you got them right at that point where they're burned completely black with just the inner red heat showing through the cracks right before they crumble.
Obvious the 'leopard' commentor has never watched a real fire.. I do agree though that some of the proportions need a little work, and it isn't as if you picked the easiest angles to draw at either! (Yeah.. I'm one of those people who has the one angle they can draw people from and clings to it desperately. In retrospect, trying other poses, on pieces like this would probably force me to improve a great deal. So kudos to you for having the guts to try stuff like this!) | |
| 16 Oct 2010 | Anon. | Loading...It DOES look like a burning jaguar.
In an ashtray... | |