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Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain

"Elven Secrets - Chapter 4" by Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain

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Here it is, my favorite chapter, please dont ask me why... the only other thing I am going to say is keep a box of tissues handy... I know I needed them when I wrote it...
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~Chapter Four~

When Liona arrived in Eldamar, she demanded to know where her daughter was. Telumendil walked out of the palace, heading towards the woman. When she saw him, she gasped and then put her hands on her hips, a stern look on her face.

“You left us!” she whisper-shouted, angrily.

“For that, I am sorry, amin a’mael.” he said, a look of genuine sorrow on his pale face.

“You have not the right to call me that anymore!” she told him, but her heart wasn’t in it. A crowd had begun to gather around the two. Just then, Ceria came running out of the palace calling,

Atara!

“Ceria!” the woman cried out. Her daughter came running up and threw herself into her mother’s arms, “Where did you learn to speak Elvish?” she whispered into her daughter’s hair.

“Calen and daddy are teaching me,” she whispered back. Telumendil had made his way up to his daughter and his love.

“I am truly sorry I left you,” he told Liona quietly.

“Why did you leave?” The woman asked, sighing exasperatedly.

“I panicked,” he began, “I never told you, but I am the Elvish King. When I found out you were with child, I wanted to take you back with me, but I feared that the Elves would not allow a human Queen. So, I left.” Liona lowered her eyes, and whispered,

“I understand.” Telumendil walked up to her and lifted her chin with a finger.

“But I never stopped loving and missing you,” he said, softly. Liona searched his eyes with her own. Ceria had walked over to stand by Calen as her parents talked.

“I wouldn’t mind a mortal queen,” Calen whispered, “as long as our King is happy.” Ceria looked up at him and smiled.

“Love is the most important thing,” she whispered back. Calen looked into her eyes. Being an Elf, he could see deep into her soul, but Ceria did not know this. The Elf smiled at her.

*~*-*~*

For the next few days, Liona stayed with her daughter in the palace. She and Telumendil did not see much of each other during that time, but Ceria and Calen took many walks together in the forest. They talked about many things or Calen taught Ceria more Elvish. Being half-Elf, and in the Elvish realm, her Elvish blood took over and Ceria only had to be told things once.

Today, they walked in the forest again. Ceria was asking about the creatures that lived in the Elvish realm with the Elves.

“Other than the Ulundo,” Calen began, “there are other creatures, such as the Mori’ksh.”

“What are the Mori’ksh?” Ceria asked, curious.

“Their name means dark evil,” Calen told her, “they are big and muscular, and dark in color, like brown or black, and they have no fur. They are very good at forging and using most weapons. Like Elves, and the Ulundo, the Mori’ksh are immortal. They have pointed ears, like most of the immortal creatures here, and they have sharp fangs. They can be very dangerous because they are a very good shot with a bow and arrow and they rarely miss. The Mori’ksh almost always travel in groups of at least 10. Luckily for us, they do not come close to our cities very often.” Calen finished explaining, and breathed in deeply.

“Sounds scary,” Ceria said, after a few seconds of silence. Calen nodded.

“They are.” Suddenly, he turned to Ceria and caught her hands in his. He leaned his face close to hers and whispered, “Promise me that you wont go wandering in the woods at night.” His clear blue eyes met hers. They pleaded and Ceria nodded, unable to speak. She saw relief flood into his eyes as he released her and continued to walk. Ceria stood there, unmoving, for a moment. Then, she ran to catch up.

*~*-*~*

The next day, Ceria and Calen met in the front hall of the palace and went for another walk. This one was unusually quiet, neither Ceria nor Calen spoke. Finally, after they had been walking for a while, Calen turned to Ceria.

“Do you remember the first day we met?” he asked her.

“I do,” she responded, looking down. Calen grinned.

“I am glad we did,” he whispered, his face, once again, close to hers. Ceria smiled and blushed.

“Me too,” she whispered back. Calen reached up and cupped her face in his hands. Then, without warning, he kissed her lips. When Calen drew away, a blush stained his cheeks. Ceria laughed, the musical sound that her mother loved so much. The two laced their fingers together and continued to walk.

Soon after, they walked into a small clearing. The sunlight shone on the trees and made them sparkle. Calen stopped abruptly, just ahead was a lone Mori’ksh. Calen tensed up and took the bow he always carried with him off his back. The creature turned and saw them. It grinned and took a black arrow from its quiver. Before Calen could react the creature had put the arrow to the string of its bow. The Mori’ksh aimed right for Ceria’s heart. With a cry of rage, Calen jumped in front of her just as the creature let the arrow loose. It hit Calen right in his chest.

“No!” Ceria screamed. As the Elf fell to the ground, Ceria snatched up his bow. She put an arrow to the string and let it fly. Her arrow hit the Mori’ksh in the forehead. It fell, and Ceria knew it was dead. She dropped the bow and knelt by Calen’s side. His eyes were closed and his breath came in short gasps. Ceria, tears coursing down her face, put a hand on his cheek. Calen’s clear blue eyes opened.

“Are you alright?” he asked, his voice strained. Ceria nodded.

“You’ll be just fine,” she said, “you have to live!”

“No,” Calen replied, slowly, voice still straining, “I am dying, but at least you are safe.”

N’uma! Lle kaiv’il- gurtha!” Ceria cried out, pain in her voice and tears in her eyes.

Amin naa gurtha, amin mela,” Calen replied, softly. Ceria looked in his eyes and knew that he was not lying.

N’uma,” she said, weakly, closing her eyes, “n’uma…” Calen reached up a hand and touched her cheek.

Amin mela lle,” he whispered. Ceria opened her eyes and gazed into his.

Amin mela lle vithel.” Ceria leaned down and brushed Calen’s lips with her own in one last kiss. He held on to her, and kissed her back. When they parted, he looked deep into her eyes.

Amin mela lle,” he whispered one last time. The Elf’s eyes closed and Ceria knew he was gone forever. She laid her head on his chest, tears soaking his shirt.

N’uma, amin mela,” she said, between sobs, “uma’il lemba amin!


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Elvish ~ Common
Amin ~ I, me, my, myself
Amin a’mael ~ My beloved
Atara! ~ Mother!
N’uma ~ No
N'uma! Lle kaiv’il- gurtha! ~ No! You will not die!
Amin naa gurtha, amin mela ~ I am dying, my love
N’uma, amin mela ~ No, my love
Uma’il lemba amin! ~ Do not leave me!

Elvish Names
Calen ~ Green
Telumendil ~ (a constellation)

Names of Elvish Cities
Eldamar ~ Elvenhome, Evermeet

Names of Elvish Buildings
Gala ~ Celebration

Names of Elvish Creatures
Ulundo ~ Deformed
Mori’ksh ~ Dark evil
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DateNameComment 
5 Nov 2003:-) Allison 'Violinagin' Dollar
Awww!! Noo!! You killed a character! Hmm... I would say shame on you but... sometimes it has to be done. I did have a thought though, You could introduce the dark evil things with the blue evil things in the first chapter. (have her ask about them, and have them explained there) Twas a bit predictable that they met one a bit after it. Still good though

:-) Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "Yeah, sometimes it has to be done!! *sniff sniff* but it's still sad!!"
8 Dec 200345 Jeniece N. McDonald
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! *cries* It's soo SAD!! WAAAAAAA! AUGH!
i don't care if you didn't use good technique, it's sad... I'm going to go cry now... WAAAAAAA!!!

:-) Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "*cries with you* WAHHHHH!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!! WAAAAAHHH!!!!!! *stops crying* wait a minute... I know what happens....... ^_^ anyway... read more!!! this story was the first time I killed off one of my characters... "
15 Dec 2003:-) Kate *Tiggr2* Glouchevitch
*sniffles* how COULD you????!!!! I liked him! he was so nice to Ceria. *sighs, tears running down he cheeks* oh well, as Robert Frost said, "Nothing gold can stay". Couldn't you have made his hair brown? Then he might've stayed. *sighs again* marvelous, though. I really like it.

:-) Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "Yes, I know, it's so sad!! *sniffs* But it had to be done (as I said before, the inspiration wouldnt leave me alone) *sigh*"
6 Jan 200445 Hannah 'Lossëriel' Provenza
And dude.. maybe i missed a paragraph or something... WHAT IN ARDA HAPPENED TO THE ELVISH QUEEN?!?! It seems like she just sort of vanished... Which is good for the romance, but not good for consistency...

14 Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "Telumendil sorta just married her so that he could have a queen figure... He never loved her and never will... so they dont really spend that much time together... though eventually (if all this hadnt happened) they would have had to produce an heir (cause you cant rule forever, it'd get too boring 10) anyway... hope that clears things up... ^_^"
6 Jan 200445 Hannah 'Lossëriel' Provenza
Stupid Grey-Company... THEY KILLED QUENYA!!! They ruined the language... *rocks back and forth gollumishly* ruined it... But we'll get them, oh yessss...

I know what you mean by the Inspiration watching you... personally I have a Muse.. her name is Thea and she's EVIL... and an angel... I can't decide! She wakes me up in the middle of the night and forces me to *try to* make pretty things!

I've been writing a story in my free time, it's sort of violent in some parts, but I can't bring myself to hurt my characters at all! I don't know how you brilliant authors do it... That must be what makes you so good...

12 Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "hehehe ^_^ I dont know if I have a muse, but I do have the inspiration minions watching me all the time... and they have no problem waking me up in the middle of the night >10 .... This was actually my first time killing off a character *sniff sniff* it was hard to do, but I really liked how it turned out ^_^ sometimes a writer's gotta do what a writer's gotta do 10"
8 Mar 200445 Anonymous
If you ever read inkheart you'd stop killing people! murderer! *sniff*sniff*

8 Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "*sniff sniff* It had to be done! The inspiration minions wouldnt leave me alone!! *sob* Evil minions "
29 Mar 200445 Anonymous
PLEASE EXCUSE THE LANGUAGE BUT WHAT IN DEATH ISLE (the worst place ever in my books) MADE THE STUPID INSPERATION PEOPLE TELL YOU TO KILL CALEN THIS SOON hmm mabey the great evilness nicly asked them too (you'll understand once I join elfwood and post my own storys)

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8 Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "*sobs miserably* WAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! THEY WOULDN'T LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!! *SOB* ...but actualy I'm quite proud of this chapter 10 ^^"
23 Jun 2005:-) Rebecca K. Earl
awwwww no! I liked Calen, he shouldn't of died, but it did make for good reading! Great job!

8 Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "Yes! *sniff* I LOVED HIM!!! *sob*"
27 Nov 200545 Paula
NOOO! BOO HOO! Why Calen?!

29 Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "Cause I'm evil! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! ;D"
17 Mar 2007:-) Désirée Dippenaar
Aaaaaaaaah... TT.TT Poor Calen! Poor Ceria! They just got to realise their love for each other, and now it's all over!! *sobs and goes into mourning*

For a first character-killing it was pretty good... the first time I killed a character was... wait... oh, I'm a mass murderer, I can't even remember. The last story alone I guess I killed 10 or so major ones. Muahaha~ Oh well... but it is quite painful doing it, especially if it is someone you really like... I almost killed the character I had a crush on but decided not to in the end 10

Waah... >.< I hope something good will happen next... I do hope...

11 Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "I do enjoy killing off certain characters *grins evilly* hehe! It can be fun, but I'm a softie and a romantic. I think there's only been a few stories of mine where I've killed off characters that the main character was in love with and then not brought about a solution of some form (for example, having someone else for the main character who was in love with the now-dead character). I can't help that I'm a total softie pushover when it comes to love and romance in my stories! lol!"
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'Elven Secrets - Chapter 4':
 • Created by: :-) Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain
 • Copyright: ©Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Elf, Elvish, Girl, Half-elf, Half-human, Realm
 • Categories: Elf / Elves
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