|28 Dec 2004|| B Layne|
"the musty scent of ancient magic" I like that line
I usually don't go for unicorn themed stuff, but this was one that I enjoyed. As I read, I could almost imagine what it would be like to stand before a unicorn. Would time slow to a halt? Well, for this to get me to wonder about such things is quite a compliment to your poem!
*does first comment dance on crowded dance floor until she realizes everyone is looking at her... slowly realizes that she forgot to untuck her skirt from her underwear after the last trip to the bathroom* Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain
replies: "Wow! Thank you!! I'm really glad you liked it! ^_^*giggles and dances too* wheee!"
|26 Oct 2005|| Zaete (Or The Lonely Ghost)|
So this is what you write instead of finishing off Kyla's Gift, is it? I'm heart broken!! *sob*
Anyway, I still think your work is fab... Even if you didn't finish of Kyla's Gift.... Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain
replies: "hmm... I think this poem is actually older than Kyla's Gift I just never posted it... lol"
|27 Nov 2005|| Paula|