Attention! in July 2014, Elfwood.com will get a makeover! Read more about the change.

Elfwood is the worlds largest SciFi & Fantasy community.
  - 152980 members, 3 online now.
  - 10228 site visitors the last 24 hours.


Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain

"The Unicorn (poem)" by Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain

SciFi/Fantasy text 28 out of 29 by Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain.      ←Previous - Next→
Tag As Favorite
This is a poem about the beauty that is the Unicorn. This is my first poem on Elfwood!! I hope you all like it!!
Add Bookmark
Tag As FavoriteComment
←- Kyla's Gift (Meeting Priweth and Riorin) | The Sound of Unicorns (poem) -→
The Unicorn

Standing before such a beautiful and powerful creature
Staring into shining brown eyes
Breathing in the beautiful, musty scent of ancient magic
This creature stands before me like I stand before it.
So like a beast on the outside
So deep and true on the inside
Eyes filled with the knowledge of the ancients
This creature who is as old as time
The bringer of magic, the unicorn

-Nancy Ward-
←- Kyla's Gift (Meeting Priweth and Riorin) | The Sound of Unicorns (poem) -→

28 Dec 2004:-) B Layne
"the musty scent of ancient magic" I like that line 2

I usually don't go for unicorn themed stuff, but this was one that I enjoyed. As I read, I could almost imagine what it would be like to stand before a unicorn. Would time slow to a halt? Well, for this to get me to wonder about such things is quite a compliment to your poem! 2

*does first comment dance on crowded dance floor until she realizes everyone is looking at her... slowly realizes that she forgot to untuck her skirt from her underwear after the last trip to the bathroom*

2 Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "Wow! Thank you!! I'm really glad you liked it! ^_^*giggles and dances too* wheee!"
26 Oct 200545 Zaete (Or The Lonely Ghost)
So this is what you write instead of finishing off Kyla's Gift, is it? I'm heart broken!! *sob*

Anyway, I still think your work is fab... Even if you didn't finish of Kyla's Gift....

2 Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "hmm... I think this poem is actually older than Kyla's Gift 10 I just never posted it... lol"
27 Nov 200545 Paula
Nice ending.

2 Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain replies: "Thank you!"
Not signed in, Add an anonymous comment to this guestbook...    

Your Name:
Your Mail:
   Private message? (Info)

'The Unicorn (poem)':
 • Created by: :-) Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain
 • Copyright: ©Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Magic, Unicorns
 • Categories: Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters
 • Views: 625

Bookmark and Share

More by 'Nancy Kelaria Chamberlain':
Elven Secrets - Chapter 2
Rose Princess (Part Three)
Kyla's Gift (1 and 2)
Elven Secrets - Chapter 5

Related Tutorials:
  • 'The Seed of Government - Part 1' by :-)Crissy Moss
  • 'Writing in English as a Foreign Language' by :-)Inger Marie Hognestad
  • 'Villains: *Bad* Bad Guys and *Good* Bad Guys' by :-)A.R. George
  • Art Education Finder...

    Elfwood™ is a site for Fantasy and Science Fiction art and stories. The site was founded by Thomas Abrahamsson and is maintained by helpful assistants and moderators, owned by the Elfwood AB corporation.