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"Silver Dragon" by Kat (wiccanmaiden) Napthine

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flight is what makes the dragon feel alive..
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Silver Dragon

 

The darkness of night is calling me

the unending realm of my flight,

unfurling my wings, I leap into existence

 

Revelling in the cold dark heights,

with countless powerful wing beats,

I soar ever higher amongst the distant stars

 

The world that lies beneath me

the rigid spines of the mountains

fade to a half forgotten echo in my mind

 

Wings extended to the stars

defined by shimmering moonlight

I ride the currents of the sky and feel alive...

←- Pegasus | The Blue Star -→

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24 Dec 200245 Kitiara Zohalef
Wow!!! o.O That's really good!!! I wish I were halfway good with poetry. ^_^

:-) Kat (wiccanmaiden) Napthine replies: "  I'm so glad you like it, thanks so much!"
14 Jan 2003:-) Kimberly A. Botello
I like that one two. You have the poet's gift of not using too many or too few words. The words just flow.

:-) Kat (wiccanmaiden) Napthine replies: "argh if only I could translate to the novel form! Thanks so much!"
28 Jan 2003:-) Brian bonedust Dillon
way cool...wish I would feel that way...interesting though for I have a friend with the alias silver dragon...

:-) Kat (wiccanmaiden) Napthine replies: "o0ooo "way cool" thank you fellow jester! Guess you never went astral then huh? I wish I had wings though...."
20 Mar 2003:-) Laura Kathryn Lendvay
Silver dragon seems to me to be a free spirit soaring to its next destiny. Like a peaceful, departed soul; for, who could fly beyond something so grand as mountains and not give them a second thought? What but a spirit could reach for the limits of space and be so unafraid? Going astral, you say? Have you ever tried anything like that? O_o

:-) Kat (wiccanmaiden) Napthine replies: "I had in mind the notion that nothing is as important as doing what you love and being true to who you are, although the exception to that is love itself. All the same I'm happy to illicit any interpretation of my work, 'cause it means someone actually read it! And comments often inspire me to write something else or revise what I have. I do appreciate your input and do thank you for giving me ideas. B.t.w. I'm too chicken ~rolls eyes~ to be very successful at moving through the astral plane but my daydreamers imagination certainly does a good job at compensating!"
15 Apr 200345 LeMoN
Gorgeous, uplifting, inspiring.

:-) Kat (wiccanmaiden) Napthine replies: "  ~purrs~ thankyou very much..."
2 May 200545 Stupid Girl
... I love it... -is crying-
26 Oct 200545 Hailey
I think the story is very understandable and very good....
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'Silver Dragon':
 • Created by: :-) Kat (wiccanmaiden) Napthine
 • Copyright: ©Kat (wiccanmaiden) Napthine. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Flight, Moonlight, Stars, Wings
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc
 • Views: 475

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