| 13 Aug 2004 | Joslyn Rubin | Loading...Oh my! its beautiful! I guess this is the poem Dave left me to comment on. So i will! lol! its great. It puts the picture into the readers mind and makes them part of it. One thing that confuses me though... what did you mean by the name part.. I'm easily confused so don't worry about it. lol Maybe, just maybe, you can add more to it? if not its still great (just struck me like there could have been more) *does a first comment dance* Meghan Nowosad replies: "Heh heh. One day I'll probably add more. Not sure when though. Probably when she tells me her name... Oh and many people think that when you know someones (true) name you have a special power over them.In the poem though I was refering to labels, many times someone is put into a box because of a label and if the dragon has no name she has no label therefore no box. Therefore she can be whatever she wants whenever she wants." | |
| 12 Sep 2005 | Chase Daily Gordon | Loading...Awesome! I can already tell it'll be fun to read the rest of your poems! They all ahve such good Rhythm! Time to skip on to the next one! | |
| 24 Oct 2005 | Anonymous | Loading...It's beautiful! I think when you don't tell us the name it makes it even more stunning because it leaves us in mystery and makes us think (for once in our lives) lol! Plz reply! Ps. Im currently writing a strange tale of mystery and dark magic- wish me luck! | |
| 3 Feb 2007 | Shadow dragon | Loading...I really liked how you surrounded your dragon in mystery. | |