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Aida Vicens

"Mother - 1. Birth" by Aida Vicens

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Nobody knows it, but that night will change the future of the entire elven camp... how? Rūth was about to come.
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            Kneeling, Donna put her hands upon her sister’s feverish forehead. She took a deep breath, looking around, searching some other way, but there wasn’t any. She knew Leith was going to die, her hip was too narrow, and she could no change that.

            But the child Leith was giving birth to was predestined to live. Being still inside her mother’s womb, the baby was moving, trying to get out of the trap Leith’s body has proved to be. There was still a thing Donna could do.

 

            She took the ritual knife lying beside the dying woman and held it up. Her voice sounded clear, rising in the warm fragrant air.

 

            - Listen to me, Mother, listen the voice of the one that’s called like you, Donna. You are the Mother of all, and I’m just your child, and I’m asking your help like a baby cries out for her mother’s breast. May your hands me mine, may your courage be mine, may the movement of this knife be smooth as your skin. Free Leith, your child, from that pain, let her come and embrace her spirit in your arms. Give me strength, Donna, to take out her child from her womb, let the baby live the life Leith is going to be deprived from.

            I beg you, Mother of We All, help my hands to do what they have to.

 

            A sweet presence was now around them, caressing them, a new strength had come to her arms. She had to, so she would. With a fast and precise movement, Donna opened her sister’s belly. Leith’s blood and fluids started to flow from the open wound, and the child moved again. Donna took the baby in her hands and raised the child above her head.

            It was a girl, a perfect little being that started to bellow as loud as her young lungs could.

 

            Donna laid the child upon her mother’s chest, and the baby elf searched her bosom and started to suck. Leith smiled weakly, and a veil covered her eyes. With a faint voice, she whispered:

 

            - Rūth…

 

            No one heard her voice again but in dreams.

 

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22 Jun 2005:-) Jacqueline 'Jac' Tanner
Oh wow another incredibly moving piece from you. It was so short howeevr and i was disappointed for it to end so soon. I would have liked to hear more about the mother, and her pain... what she knew abot this child... what she felt about dying and so on. But it was fantastic the way it was. You write with such an emotion that its amazing!
16 Jul 2005:-) Jessica Warner
I like the ending here, " No one heard her voice again but in dreams." Very sad and poetic. Another nice piece!
4 Dec 200645 Pregnant pics luver
Cool i hope u make another
2 Feb 2007:-) Désirée Dippenaar
Oooh... short but very emotional! I'm interested in how this will go on!! ^^
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About 'Mother - 1. Birth':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Aida Vicens
 • Copyright: ©Aida Vicens. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Elf, Elven, Camp, Rūth
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Elf / Elves, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Romance, Emotion, Love
 • Views: 300


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