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"Cold" by N.*Aissatan* Nic

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The name was the only thing i could think of... this is about the two main characters of Helswhith.
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←- Aissatan: Chapter 1 | Helwhithian Dreams~ Prologue -→

Cold

Two abject souls

bound together

held forever

in eternity

in never-ending night

The scarcity

of anything bright

the frightening revelation

that made sunlight

a foreign dream

and moonlight

only slightly less

believable

by the two blackened souls

trapped by each other

torn and shredded

but always clinging

to the only thing

The cries and screaming

knowing the otherís pain

never letting go

to reach for their only salvation

even though they know

that their prison

their entrapment

the horrors and terrors

that cause their screams

piercing the night sky

shattering like

twin panes of glass

was the only thing that held them fast

the only thing they could not let go

not even to see their own lives grow

the pain

the fear

the knowing

and not knowing

the cold stone floors

and walls

the scarlet that soaked their hair

that brought their tears

that brought the need

for each other to cling to

and it would never end

their love

would be the death of them

←- Aissatan: Chapter 1 | Helwhithian Dreams~ Prologue -→

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5 Nov 2002:-) Mel (Fallen Angel) Wright
I love the way you strctured this, end the words you use convey emotions wonderfully.
Me likes this too2
17 Dec 2003:-) Yuki Erika Radcliffe
wow, that's sad. It's very good, very well-written. i'm surprised there aren't more comments on this piece.
first of all, congradulations on the mod's choice in your other gallery, that's how i found my way here.
and great job with this one, too. I love it!
20 May 200745 Anonymous
That's really, truly incredible. I love your writing and art. You are brilliant!
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'Cold':
 • Created by: :-) N.*Aissatan* Nic
 • Copyright: ©N.*Aissatan* Nic. All rights reserved!

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 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Celtic
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