"Fight Between Royalties" by Nataliy Nirrael Klymenko

You are have done an amazing job on the horse anatomy. I love the concept of this picture, it's very original. Excellent work!

Nataliy Nirrael Klymenko replies: "Thank you very much!"

I would love to read the story that goes along with this amazing picture. great job.

P.s. if you want, you can post it at this poetry, lyrics and short stories website. I would really love it if you did. : ) http://chp.proboards18.com/index.cgi

Nataliy Nirrael Klymenko replies: "Thank you very much Leash! I will definitely poste the story at that website, when I will finaly finish it, and than translate it nicely into English... Oh, I guess it woun't be very soon though, *sigh*, but anyways thank you! I guess it won't make me much trouble to go there and read some stories! I LOVE READING!!!!!!!! O_O"

The horses and figures are wonderful. I really like the way Neolla's hair is flying out, which brings me to a problem- Given the action of this battle the King's hair should be flying around a bit too. Given the way the battle is twisting it looks like it could fly up and obscure the swords and face of the dark elf(?!) (or perhaps she's just bad ). Take it as a critique for your next picture. This picture STILL looks great. (Of course it could just be settling down now but it does not quite look that way.)(Sounds like an interesting back story as well...)

Nataliy Nirrael Klymenko replies: "Hi again! I've decided to clear up things a bit, you see, I am to much into the moments of the story, when I draw. And situation is that the kaygazeer (the black horse) had reared to the highest point and now is going down, thats why Nirrael's hair is flying. And the king's horse is just going to rear up, and in that tipe of motion the kings hair can't really fly much. And also at the end of each braid the king has a sharp and heavy metal tips, which he uses at a close fight as some kind of a sudden weapon, to slush his enemy's fase. So I guess his hair would not fly much in any way, unless he made it fly by a powerful turn of his head. Yeah, I know it is hard to see it all when you are not familiar with the story. And I am just crasy about all the tricky little battle slynesses. 0_o . Hope now the picture has more sense to you. Thanks for your comment!"

GGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOO BLACK UNI!!!!!!! Great pic, it sooo rocks!

Nataliy Nirrael Klymenko replies: "Thanks a lot!!!!!!"

*if*

I meant to write *if* and not 'in' for the unicorn
sorry.

Hi ! ! ! !

I love this picture ! ! ! ! You did such a wonderful job, it looks so beautiful ! ! ! !

I read the comment you left for 'Paul M' up above, and I read the whole note and your comment about the motion of the king's vs. the princess's hair. I see your point, but in the black equine(unicorn) is coming back down from a rearing position, that would make the girl's hair fly . . . but that also means that the mane of the unicorn should be flying up as well. Not the tail, but the mane

I just thought I would mention this since you had planned out the hair for the king and princess. Maybe you intended the unicorn's mane hair to hang down possibly due to little weapons as well?

Again, the picture is lovely (I hope my comments were helpful Keep up the great work!)

Wow....The anatomy in the horses is amazing!

Wow! The darker horse's muscular structure and sheen coats looks absolutely stunning! Very well portrayed! ^_^*

wow
your shading on both are so good
how do u get the black to look JUST black and the white white?
the motion and ahh this is just so GOOD

This is great, but you spell it "pencils" not "pensils"