| 28 Aug 2005 | Alexander A.Trayanov | Loading...The problem with the back hand is, that it's twisted the wrong way. The blade of the sword must point AWAY from the body, not towards it. That will, of course, affect the twist of the wrist. Now it looks like it's broken. You could also lower it down a bit, because, even while running, such an exaggerated motion is not typical for any sane person.  Otherwise it's a great pic. I mean it. | |
| 28 Aug 2005 | Lijn | Loading...WOW.... thats amazing I just LOVE it!! Your SO good, keep up this good stuff!! | |
| 29 Aug 2005 | Ryuoni | Loading...I think this is an awesome character design. The arm is perfect the way it is, obviously this guy is a wild swords-man, especially if he is willing to dislocate a shoulder when attacking. Keep the arm where it is, and keep up the good work. | |
| 25 Sep 2006 | Ele 'Beruthiel' J. | Loading...Hmmm... perhaps if you drew his sword arm raised above his head? That said, I don't think I would've noticed anything wrong at all if you hadn't pointed it out.Your linework is fantastic, and so is your colouring (that background has imprinted itself on my retinas... buuurning...). The little whoosh-marks in the air by his front arm are just perfect... is it steam escaping from his mechanical bits? That's just what I assume, seeing you're a China Mieville fan (woohoo!) Most of all, I love the expression on his face. Triumphant and a little bit smug. I really like your style! | |