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"Angel" by Lain Sakuraba

SF&F Picture 5 out of 7 by Lain Sakuraba

Inspiration was a wonderful friend of mine whom I could always cheer up.

I’ll give you a hug tonight

I’m that angel on your shoulder

Always making things right

When you need me you can call

I’ll pick you up, should you fall

If you need me then you can find me

On the shoulder of thee

I’ll give you a hug tonight

I’m that angel on your shoulder

Always making things right

If your heart is broken

I’ll give you a hug tonight

I’m that angel on your shoulder

Love, hope, wish, dream

Smile, laugh, live, gleam

Share with all

The gift that you shall befall

I’ll give you a hug tonight

I’m that angel on your shoulder

I’ll give you a hug tonight

I’m that angel on your shoulder

Always making things right

Date	Name	Comment
25 Mar 2004	Angels-sweetie	Loading... that is a beautiful poem!!! does first comment dance I myself happen to know who my angel is and that just says it all!!! keep writing ur great! Lain Sakuraba replies: "I'm glad you liked it! I love it when people have angels, or are angels, it's a wonderful time of life for those people. Everybody deserves one!"
7 Apr 2004	CARL SPENCER carlspenc1@aol...c	Loading... hello again, I finally got the chance to read some stuff on your web site... lol. this is a really great bit of writing and I really enjoyed reading it, the content is wonderful and it is full of heartfelt feelings. wonderful to read. well done. happy scribbling and keep in touch. I am CARLSPENC1 from Allpoetry.com Lain Sakuraba replies: "I've had lots of practice! Thanks for the comments, and I'm glad you enjoyed my writing! "
14 Jul 2008	L. Viner	Loading... It’s really beautiful what you do with the words, and I love the way you put the sentences with different sizes, I think it really adds creativity to the poem. It’s a lovely poem, please keep writing