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"Creatures" by Lain Sakuraba

SF&F Picture 1 out of 7 by Lain Sakuraba

Another Vamp story- Written for a friend, originally. Inspiration- A Charmed Demon (Cole).

In the darkness of the night

Hidden from creatures of the light

Deep inside the darkest shadow

Lies a fear you could never fathom

Wanting blood, rich and warm

Causing the next natural storm

Thunder, rain, lightning bolt

Mortals scared like a timid colt

Watch your back as you turn

This lesson taught must be a lesson learned

Afraid to leave your house at night

Beware mortal, you shall die

Like a river, spirit flowing

Bodies immortal, mind ever knowing

As the wind blows when you rise

Look not into your lovers eyes

Lest we visited in the night

For the eyes know no light

Causing destruction

Always fun

Join us in our quest to destroy all light

Join us, the creatures of the night

←- Pools Of Blood | Legends Of Love -→

Date	Name	Comment
19 Feb 2004	Brittney N. Borton	Loading... I like this alot ^_^ It doesnt flow in every spot, but its still pretty darn good. Lain Sakuraba replies: "you're right... edit...pens and paper must be found...thanks..."
6 Mar 2004	Jason	Loading... Weee i loved this poem!! I can always tell a good poem from a bad one, because when I read a good poem i get tinglies up my spine!!! and i LOVE charmed!! plays with his cole action figure Lain Sakuraba replies: "... Thanks??? I'm glad you liked it, and where on Earth did you come up with a Cole Action Figure??? "
7 Mar 2004	Melchart	Loading... Oh this poem fits! I like cole, he´s a really cool character! I´ve also read the others... very good, but I like this one best! Lain Sakuraba replies: "Cole is very cool... Thank you for your comments!!!"
26 Mar 2004	Wendy Bittnerová	Loading... I've always thought it would be really wonderful to be a vampire...again your poem creates a vivid picture. Lain Sakuraba replies: "Being a Vampire is wonderful...I'm glad you enjoyed this!"
7 Apr 2004	CARL SPENCER carlspenc1@aol...c	Loading... This is really well written and is a pleasure to read too, you are truely talented and this flows really well.. It almost feels like the lyrics to a goth song. Well done Lain Sakuraba replies: "Thanks Carl! It wasn't meant to be a song, but I'm sure I could be. Thanks for the comment!"
14 Jul 2008	L. Viner	Loading... I love this poem, is very good! It paints such a picture, the descriptions and the the use of the words are amazing Very, very nice work vampires rule - I just had to say that

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About 'Creatures':

• Status: OK
• Created by:

Lain Sakuraba
• Copyright: ©Lain Sakuraba. All rights reserved!

• Keywords: Vampires, Horror, Rhyming
• Categories: Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
• Views: 252

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