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"Nightmare" by Lain Sakuraba

SF&F Picture 6 out of 7 by Lain Sakuraba

A Vampyric poem written for elfwood.

The aren’t like you and me

Spirits floating up everfree

Dark skys instead of light ones

Cuz the heavy clouds blot out the sun

Can I kill a dream

Can I **** a nightmare

I was warned- told not to go there

Eyes rimmed in rings of gold

Flesh immortal, spirit bold

Who wouldn’t want to be one

Find the love, join the fun

Ever daring

Never caring

Can I kill a dream

Can I **** a nightmare

I was told they shouldn’t be there

Understanding me is not done

When people see them, they run

Hidden from light

Creature of the night

Can I kill a dream

Can I **** a nightmare

Nothing to live for out there

Two halfs to a whole

In the world evil plays a role

To depressed to go on

Nobodys even sorry im gone

The afterlife ain’t so bad

Nobody angry nobody mad

I killed a dream

I ****** a nightmare

Still can’t make myself care

←- Angel | Pools Of Blood -→

Date	Name	Comment
19 Feb 2004	Brittney N. Borton	Loading... This is really really spiffy! twirls Whoo! I like the part about amber eyes. Hmmm thinks Grawr! You got my thinking! Lain Sakuraba replies: "Ya know, I had to go back and look and find the line that you were talking about, I believe it is "Eyes rimmed in rings of gold", a factor my cousin SWEARS all Vampires have. Look into that new guys eyes before you fall in love... He may be your death..."
6 Mar 2004	Jason	Loading... I likededed this poem! i wonder what it would sound like as a song O_o ^_^ Lain Sakuraba replies: "Wow, you picked up on that fast- It was written originally as a song for a school contest. Our band played it live... It was great, and it is great as a song! Thanks for realizing that and noticing it!!!"
8 Apr 2004	CARL SPENCER carlspenc1@aol...c	Loading... This is wonderful to read and it nearly had bad language in it too ?...Lol, you really know how to keep the reader wanting more and this is really great. You should write more stuff like this. Well done. Keep in touch. Lain Sakuraba replies: "Oi- This site doesn't allow such langauge (the full and actual one is on the AP site if you'd prefer it) so it has to be edited... LOL... "
12 Nov 2004	Amy	Loading... I think it was very good it was so good my little cuzen liked it and that is good so you do your best and write stories Lain Sakuraba replies: "Thanks! I'm glad your cousin liked it!"

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About 'Nightmare':

• Status: OK
• Created by:

Lain Sakuraba
• Copyright: ©Lain Sakuraba. All rights reserved!

• Keywords: Horror, Fear, Nightmares, Rhyming
• Categories: Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
• Views: 196

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