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Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir

"A Vampire’s kiss (Vampire series part 1)" by Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir

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I wrote this story after going on a tour on elfwood called Vampires. I just felt like I had to write some vampire stuff and this is what came out.
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                                         A vampire’s kiss

 

I am going to tell you a story. The story of that night. The story of the night I met a vampire. First I should tell you what I look like, a look that I have always been teased of but saved me that night. I have red-brownish hair that shines of bronze in sun- and moonlight. My blue eyes shiver when I am angry or scared. I have two pointy teeth’s in my mouth and except for my freckles my skin is pale.

That night I was at a party with my friend, I usually don’t go to parties but that night for some reason I did. And there he was. Standing there in his black clothes, staring at me with his beautiful grey eyes. He came to me when my friend was dancing. It was like his eyes were drawing me towards him. His voice was no more than a whisper when he said hello. I felt shy but I answered. When he was about to speak again my friend came and interrupted. I went with her away from him. Later that night I went out to get some fresh air. As soon as the doors had closed I saw him again, but this time in the moonlight. His skin was even paler than my own and as he smiled at me I saw his white fangs. Fear took me as his eyes began to draw me towards him again. My eyes began to shiver and as they do the world shivers before my eyes and so I was free from the spell. He seemed surprised for a moment but then started walking towards me. In only a moment he was right in front of me, so close that I could feel his cold breath on my face. As his hand touched my shoulder I did the only thing I had left to do. I hissed at him, like a cat. You may think it sounds strange but I have always felt that a part of me is a cat, and I always do that when I can’t think of anything else to do. This time his surprise did not go away that quickly. “I’m sorry my lady, I did not realise you were one of us.” He said with his low, beautiful voice. Me, a vampire? Of Corse, he had seen my teethes and thought I was one of them. My friends always said I was good actress, now it was time to see if they were right. “I was starting to think you would never figure it out.” I said in a low, soft voice. “I was mislead by your freckles, they are signs of the sun.” He said and looked a bit ashamed of himself. “They are memories from my past life that don’t seem to want to leave.” I told him. “Memories sometimes do that.” He said and then leaned over and kissed me. That kiss I will never forget, even though I cannot describe it in any other way than cold, passionate and beautiful. It was like we were lovers and had been for ages. As I was still in shock after the kiss he said; “Time to go and find another victim then. I am Marik. What would your name be my lady?” “Tara” I answered, thinking that he had the right to know what I really call myself. “Farwell then, Tara. I hope we meet again.” With that he turned around and disappeared into the shadows. “So do I” I whispered after him and that was how I truly felt.

I was 16 that night. Now I am 23 and still I have not seen him again. But I still remember it like it happened yesterday. And I still stare out my window into the darkness at nights, and hope that one day I will meet again the vampire that I love.

←- The demon | Writer Block -→

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14 Oct 2006:-) Musty Zein
Nice story, a few little spelling mistakes here and there like partys should be parties. but anyways, nice story

:-) Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "thank you, and since I am Icelandic I am not to good in spelling but I try to do my best."
17 Oct 200645 Angelica
Very good spelling, i mean i am fully English and you spelling is beter than mine! I enjoyed the story! I thought it was class-A

:-) Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "Thank you2 I really apreciate it"
15 Nov 2006:-) Emelie 'Emmy' Thordelöf
Wow... That was great. I was so into the story so when someone logged in on my msn and that noise came I sorta twitched xD haha anyhoo great story I really enjoy these kinds of stories
Great work ^.^

:-) Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "Thanks so much2"
1 Dec 2006:-) Shaun P. Ingamells
WOW!!! that was awesome i lurve vampyres and anything vampyric as i said that was awesome!!!

:-) Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "Thank you2"
12 Dec 200645 Naomi
Like i said, i'd comment on this one. and i really love this story. the atmosphere is so great. it's so...lovely. i really do like this, which is unusual as i'm not a big fan of vampires.

:-) Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "Thanks2 Im a sucker for vampires so10"
13 Dec 200645 Sigga rúna
hey áa ! I love this story so much as you know well first of all it is a good story and second it has a vampire in it well as you know i love vampires and i hope you will keep up the good work and make some more vampire ore werewolf stories. Your best friend sigga rúna !!!

:-) Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "I thought it was sigga mæja10 but thanks"
23 Dec 2006:-) Ksenia Zherdeva
I love the story! I want more! The idea is awesome, I like that.

:-) Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "Thank you2 There is more already up. This is the first part in my vampire series. A vampires blood and a vampires child are the second and the third parts and soon to come is part 5 (four will be skipped). Im glad you like it2"
6 Jan 2007:-) Tara Mae *Violet witch* Nester
Interesting. Although the first way you worded how she looked was, odd. i would suggest re-phrasing that. Perhaps something like "My look was probably the only thing that saved me. I have the palest of pale skin, uninterrupted except for freckles, red-brown hair that shines oddly in sun and moonlight, and oddly pointed canines that I was made fun of for at shool." Oh, yeah, i have no clue what you mean by "eyes that shiver".

Cute tale!
Your artist twin,
~Tara~

:-) Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "The look I described is my own10 But anyway, eyes that shiver are simply what my eyes do, litterally shiver. it is like the eyepupil and the coloured ring around it(me not know english word) they shake around really fast and the whole world shakes around like in an earthquake for me. most people say grosed unless they can do it too."
12 Jan 2007:-) Courtney ´ Shortney´ Rodgers
I enjoyed this very much! it did have a few minor mistakes, but who am I to talk? My spelling's awful. It could have been a bit longer, but I liked it none the less.

:-) Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "well, thats why I wrote more parts10"
20 Jan 200745 Sushi_zombie
mmmmm, vampirific! X) i love vampires! r ur other vampy stories related 2 this one?

:-) Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "yup. this is the first part. maybe I should add that to the title. hmmm. probobly."
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About 'A Vampire’s kiss (Vampire series part 1)':
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 • Created by: :-) Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir
 • Copyright: ©Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Vampire, Girl, Kiss
 • Categories: Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
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