| 14 Oct 2006 | Musty Zein | Loading...Nice story, a few little spelling mistakes here and there like partys should be parties. but anyways, nice story Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "thank you, and since I am Icelandic I am not to good in spelling but I try to do my best." | |
| 17 Oct 2006 | Angelica | Loading...Very good spelling, i mean i am fully English and you spelling is beter than mine! I enjoyed the story! I thought it was class-A Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "Thank you I really apreciate it" | |
| 15 Nov 2006 | Emelie 'Emmy' Thordelöf | Loading...Wow... That was great. I was so into the story so when someone logged in on my msn and that noise came I sorta twitched xD haha anyhoo great story I really enjoy these kinds of stories Great work ^.^ Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "Thanks so much " | |
| 1 Dec 2006 | Shaun P. Ingamells | Loading...WOW!!! that was awesome i lurve vampyres and anything vampyric as i said that was awesome!!! Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "Thank you " | |
| 12 Dec 2006 | Naomi | Loading...Like i said, i'd comment on this one. and i really love this story. the atmosphere is so great. it's so...lovely. i really do like this, which is unusual as i'm not a big fan of vampires. Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "Thanks Im a sucker for vampires so " | |
| 13 Dec 2006 | Sigga rúna | Loading...hey áa ! I love this story so much as you know well first of all it is a good story and second it has a vampire in it well as you know i love vampires and i hope you will keep up the good work and make some more vampire ore werewolf stories. Your best friend sigga rúna !!! Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "I thought it was sigga mæja but thanks" | |
| 23 Dec 2006 | Ksenia Zherdeva | Loading...I love the story! I want more! The idea is awesome, I like that. Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "Thank you There is more already up. This is the first part in my vampire series. A vampires blood and a vampires child are the second and the third parts and soon to come is part 5 (four will be skipped). Im glad you like it " | |
| 6 Jan 2007 | Tara Mae *Violet witch* Nester | Loading...Interesting. Although the first way you worded how she looked was, odd. i would suggest re-phrasing that. Perhaps something like "My look was probably the only thing that saved me. I have the palest of pale skin, uninterrupted except for freckles, red-brown hair that shines oddly in sun and moonlight, and oddly pointed canines that I was made fun of for at shool." Oh, yeah, i have no clue what you mean by "eyes that shiver". Cute tale! Your artist twin, ~Tara~ Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "The look I described is my own But anyway, eyes that shiver are simply what my eyes do, litterally shiver. it is like the eyepupil and the coloured ring around it(me not know english word) they shake around really fast and the whole world shakes around like in an earthquake for me. most people say grosed unless they can do it too." | |
| 12 Jan 2007 | Courtney ´ Shortney´ Rodgers | Loading...I enjoyed this very much! it did have a few minor mistakes, but who am I to talk? My spelling's awful. It could have been a bit longer, but I liked it none the less. Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "well, thats why I wrote more parts " | |
| 20 Jan 2007 | Sushi_zombie | Loading...mmmmm, vampirific! X) i love vampires! r ur other vampy stories related 2 this one? Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir replies: "yup. this is the first part. maybe I should add that to the title. hmmm. probobly." | |