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Nina du Preez
Nina du Preez is a member of The Wyvern"s Library at Elfwood.


 
 

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PhotoNina du Preez is a Admin Assistant who takes delight in churning out fantasy art and poetry with pagan or celtic influence.
 
   Published stories by Nina du Preez   
  
*  Dragonlore *  Of earth and hearth 

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15 Oct 200545 Anonymous
They are both very good, but the flow seems a little off on them. Maybe try a little re-writing and reading it aloud to check the flow? But don't ask me, my poems are VERY bad, so I wouldn't know! I like the "earth and hearth" one better but that's just me. The dragon one seems a little forced to me...

Whatever, I think they are very nice but could use a little work to make them perfect. Not much work, but a touch! Keep writing!
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