Read your Zabole. Haven't had any sleep. Random comments... Coffee is gold. Should be gold.
Awesome, really. Awesome. I didn't comment on the actual story 'cause I'm too lazy and my computer is being retarded. Not loading comment pages, and yet it loads this one! Images are bad, I tell you, eat up my sucky bandwidth. Remind me not to watch YouTube ever again.
Again, awesome, very nice, very fluent, little complaints. The only complain I shall voice, because I don't won't to be troublesome, is Faokan. [Is that how it's spelled? I forgot... I need to wake up...] Want to slap him upside his stupid head. "Yeah, my kingdom is in danger of being destroyed, pillaged, burned to the ground, with all of its inhabitants either killed or sold into slavery, but hey, I'm one guy who doesn't want to think about demons and be selfish all by his lonesome, so I'm not gonna do anything." Graar.
You ever had the feeling where you just want a random anvil to fall from the sky and kill one of your characters? Heh.
MukLuk-ish character? I remember something about that, but ain't entirely sure. If you can't fit her, psh, I don't care. Just hurry up and post the sequel before I light Faokan's hair on fire, eh?
*Lays upon Brendon's floor and begins to snore...* Brendon Adam Shapiro replies: "Yay, it's Mukluk!!! I'm glad you're reading it, and enjoying it, and I'm glad you're pissed at Faokan - you're supposed to be. More will hopefully be up relatively soon..."
Hey there...thanks for commenting on my work....I just wanted to tell you I have a new story up ... a beginning really called Its a Kind of Magic....check it out when you have time!! Let me know what you think... Brendon Adam Shapiro replies: "I definitely will, thanks for letting me know!"
I'm too lazy. O_o Brendon Adam Shapiro replies: "So am I - I've totally been neglecting both Elfwood and my story since I got back to college... baah! "
Hello again. It's been quite a while, but I seem to have found myself with a large quantity of time on my hands. And so, I have returned to finish your story. It's about time, right? Anyway, hope all is well.
*The Cheese Girl* formerly known as Miss Sassypants Brendon Adam Shapiro replies: "Wow, it's been ages!! Free time? You've come to the right place, haha!What happened to your sassypantsness? Although I do appreciate you being the cheese girl too, lol."
*points upward* seconded. Brendon Adam Shapiro replies: "I know, I know... in my defense I've been working on editing and revising the first book whenever I get the chance instead of writing the sequel as much, and that's why I haven't uploaded anything new in a long time. FYI though I've made a few pretty interesting additions/changes to Fazad, at least I think so, so I haven't been entirely unproductive. Still, the going is slow, and I wish I had more time to write... sad times... I promise though once I get inspired, or get more time, there will be more installments of the sequel up here! "
Hey, Brendon! Thanks for your comment on FW. Even if it was *cough* VERY late *cough* *stern look* Actually, I kind of just assumed you’d read it and forgotten to comment. o_O
Anyway, this new comment system keeps screwing up on me, so I’ll reply to it properly when some of the bugs have been fixed. (Rather than risk trying to reply and losing it...) Brendon Adam Shapiro replies: "No problem! This new comment system is weird, but I kind of like it actually!! It might make it harder to reply within the comment like you like to do though, I don’t know. "
I just wanted to drop a line and letcha know that I just read through the entirety of Fazad, and what you have up of Zabole, and I thought it was marvelous. I’m itching for more! I have so many comments I want to make that I can’t remember them all, but odds are I’ll think of a few once I take a break and digest everything. In any case, it’s a really snappy, amusing read, with some very compelling characters. Don’t be surprised if you see some fanart from me pop up. ^_~ Brendon Adam Shapiro replies: "Wow, thanks so much for reading, I’m really glad people are still dropping by and enjoying Fazad, cool! And you have no idea how thrilled I would be to see fanart - let me know if you put any up!"
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