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Michal Nymeria Goderez

"True Immortality Looks At Life" by Michal Nymeria Goderez

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From the point of view of a TRUE immortal...what our lives look like. Makes you feel somewhat insignificant? Me too. I likes lot, and though I originally did it all in italics, I can't upload it like that. Oh well. Hope you like. I was thinking recently what this would be like as an idea for a longer piece, like a very short story...hmmmmm...
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Lives flutter before me, fleeting and brilliant with light. The fogs of eons swirl thickly, and nothing can be trusted anymore. I have too many memories, and it hurts me, second after second after second, to watch as mortals are born and live and die, all in a moment, passing quicker than one breath. Can a tear be shed for something that is gone as quick as it has come, I wonder. So many, even those who are called immortal, flickering out like a candle in the wind, only moments after it was lit.

Questions and answers. The world rises and falls in waves, following an unceasing rhythm, and time swirls into itself, unable to see the pathway out. Futility reins in the lives of those who die so quickly. I can see the fog that covers them so thickly that they never even have the chance to see the sun before their momentary life has come to an end.

And there have been so many. I have learned that there are endless more ways to die than there are to live, and I have learned that mortals see themselves as immortal, though only for a fraction of a second, a sliver of a moment.

Wind blows the fog away, in time, and I have seen the moon shine over clearest water, and seen lives flicker and die, melting into dust to be forgotten in an instant.

Patterns weave in and out, creating a tapestry of time. I can see the weave, the thread, the needles. I can see the fraying edges, and the stitch after stitch after stitch after stitch after stitch, all the same.

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20 Feb 2008:-) Natalie Beth Myers
i luv this! yeah, it does make you a little insignificant, doesn’t it? hm. whatever. i liked this so much, Michal. =)

:-) Michal Nymeria Goderez replies: "Thanks again! Eventually I’ll get the other story I’m working on up...hope you enjoy that as well!
22 Feb 2008:-) Yume Li
This is very good! It holds lots of promise, maybe you should elaborate upon it and make it into a story!
9 May 2009:-) Tayla Waterworth
Wow, brilliant descriptive piece. I like 2
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'True Immortality Looks At Life':
 • Created by: :-) Michal Nymeria Goderez
 • Copyright: Creative Commons LicenseThe work 'True Immortality Looks At Life' by Michal Nymeria Goderez is licensed under a Creative Commons Sampling 1.0 License.
 • Keywords: Destiny, Fate, Immortal, Immortality, Life, Mortal, Mortality, Time, True, Universe
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Romance, Emotion, Love
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