"CLAMP´s Creations" by Jennifer O´Reilly

"Ja Ne" is an informal way of saying goodbye. Creative picture. I would try putting in a background or something. I really like the placement of the characters, but the Rayearth eyes look strange and Suu looks too thin. Also, I think that the people's eyes are too dark in contrast with the rest of the picture. ^^;; but that's just me. What do I know? ^^

Jennifer O'Reilly replies: "  Thank you so much for the japanese lesson. Thank you for your comments, now that you mention it, Fuu does look rather thin. The eye thing is that I usually draw the eyes first then put the rest in afterwards. Usually the end result is that they all seem really dark... I gotta fix that soon... Thank you so much once again... "

I just love Chi and Hideki! I love Chobits! It's very well laid out! I love it!

Jennifer O'Reilly replies: "Out of the clamp series, Chobits is my favorite too! "

Lol! Too Cute!! Love Chi! And MKR and...um..I think that's about all that I know. Is Dragon Half on there? Or am I thinking of a different thing? Again, cute and wonderful!
>^^<

Jennifer O'Reilly replies: "I didn't think DragonHalf is a Clamp series... All I know is that I have to put Kamui from X1999 on there, and Misaki from Angelic Layer... and the three detectives from Clamp School Detectives... Man do I have some work to do... "

I don't see Kohaku or Shuichiro from Wish, but it's good anyway.

Jennifer O'Reilly replies: "I know... This picture is over a year old... More work!!! "

Please don't take this the wrong way. I think that your piece is a nice looking one, but I feel that the best way to help an artist is to offer constructive criticism. This picture is about a year or more old, but you're pic just popped right up when I typed in "clamp" into the fanquarters search engine. ::
Your style doesn't look very clamp-ish. I know that it's literally impossible to copy clamp-style, but I think that you could do a better joy on the MK eyes. Suu's head looks bigger than her body, the wings are very well done. And you need work on the hands from what I can tell. It's a very difficult position, I know, but I think that you can brush up on the joints in Fuu's hand and on Hideki + Chi's hand(s) as well. Chi's skirt needs folds in it and there could be a lot most shading. I think that It would look good colored.

Jennifer O'Reilly replies: "Thank you for you constructive critisism, and you are right, this picture is really old... I feel that much of my newer stuff is a lot better... "

...wow...lines...O.O

Jennifer O'Reilly replies: ":: Giggles :: Cute.."

But...Where is Misaki and Hikaru from Angelic Layer?...¬¬

Jennifer O'Reilly replies: "I know!!! I need to redo the whole picture... But it's kind of back in Michigan while I'm here in Arizona... Mom, send me my stuff!!! "

Where..*studders* where's kohaku..And koryu from wish? Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh! It's short but sweet manga! Please include them!

Jennifer O'Reilly replies: "Ahhhh!!! I sowwy!!!! I have Wish myself... and it is so pretty! "

Cute! I love Clamp! HOw are you? Great work! ^^
~Verchiel

Jennifer O'Reilly replies: "I'm just fine, thank you so much for asking! Thanks for the nice comment as well! "

Chi!!!!!!!!!!!! Chi chi chi chi chi!!!!!!!!