Your prose is just beautiful! I particularly liked 'Confessions' - it was very hard to stop reading (so I didn't). Very, very well-written. The way you describe people is extremely vivid, and chilling in vampiric cases , and the children in 'The Blue Stone' sounded very natural in conversation, as opposed to "cutesy".

Speaking from a personal point of view, though, I'd probably avoid using lots of fancy words like 'orbs' and 'visual organs' to substitute for 'eyes'. 'Orbs' can sound nice in full poetic verse, but for some reason it made me blink to see it in normal narrative. 'Visual organs' did, too.

That said, I'm sure there are people who'll disagree with me and prefer those substitutions. I hope you put some more into your gallery soon!

Megan K. O'Shea replies: "Hehe, I write a lot of poetry, so that could be part of it. But I also like to make people stop and read what I write, so I do throw in things like that from time to time. It's part of my style, I guess. It does get kida boring reading the word 'eyes' 20 times on one page, too. "

Wow.. Your works is more awesome! It is beautiful,a dn interesing. You truly know how to hold a persons attention when writting. Through the characters persona and through thier attitudes, (which i think has alot to do with writting anyways) not alot i have seen with this calibre of work. Please don't stop writting!

::hands a nice big plate of christmas cookies::

CoS is through 14, only 2 more chapters and book one is done! ::does the happy dance::

How is the writing coming? I do not see anything new, but I will poke around. Let me know when you update

Err...you said you updated, but as you didn't say *what* you updated, I don't know what to look at. I recommend a line in your bio that lists the last things updated to make it easier

Megan K. O'Shea replies: "Whoops, heh heh, don't I feel dumb. I'll do it ASAP, thanks!"