| 31 May 2000 |  Chuck Patterson | well, I guess that I should be the first one to sign the comment area since this is for me, but i would just like to welcome you all here, and I take any kind of feed back as long as it is honest and true. and if you see any misspelled words, dont be affraid to tell me. thanx | |
| 1 Jun 2000 | Jessica | I thought i had better be a good friend and leave a comment. so here it is. interesting. you surprise me with stuff almost everyday. | |
| 2 Jun 2000 | Katie | Hey! this is StarQueen/Luadra/Eravis blah blah blah... I didn't know you were a junior.  me too... | |
| 3 Jun 2000 | Lisa Ann Stevens | *decides to actually leave a comment about your work....* Charles, you're a very talented writer....my biggest advice to you is to SHOW what's going on rather than TELL what's going on. The reader needs to be able to see what's happening in his head as he reads the story (that's something I have a problem with too)....over all though, you are very talented...keep it up | |
| 4 Jun 2000 | Thelma | Once again u have shown a very good talent for writing and i encourage u to explore more techniques to grasp the attention of the reader in a more magnetic way . i wish u well in this quest and may u enjoy all the steps of this journey. Peace be thine. 10drl | |
| 7 Oct 2000 | Michelle | Hey chuckie........it's interesting....i think you have some talent going on....keep it up...even know i'm nto always sure what you are talking about! good job! | |
| 17 Apr 2001 | Nathi | hey....cool web site...wonder when youll read my comment...but i do compliment you on the web site your friend nathi | |
| 22 Feb 2002 | Gina Stone | Nice page i like alot Mr. President | |
| 14 May 2002 | Auman (Kristy) | hey patterson u r definitely as weird as I thought!!! hey I need the address to the units homepage!!! Thanks!!! | |
