Hello...

I dont really have anything to say... You have translated ( I think... Or you think... Bah! )...the stories great!...

Okey... Next thing I write in danish...
Æhm... Jeg forstod faktisk hvad det var du havde skrevet! ( Vildt!... Jeg må kunne lidt engelsk! )... Og jeg er glad for at du har fået sat historierne ind...
Okey... I think I can write the next thing in english...

I like the storys ( Ofcourse )... And remember... Tell me when your other stories are coming... I want to read them!

( Æhm... Hvad er det jeg ska skrive nu? / Æhm... What shall I write now? Åh... I write hm... M.V.H... )

M.V.H Eskarina / Maria

Anna N. Pedersen replies: " Thank you Maria! See you on M/S Jubii!"

Thanks for commenting on my page, and in case you don't check back I thought that I'd comment on your question. I found your gallery by checking out the "Recent additions" section of Elfwood. So I hope that helps you out, thanks again.

Anna N. Pedersen replies: "Oh.. Thank you again! ^_^ Anna ^_^"

Welcome to the Woods! I really liked "Light of the Moon", it reminds me of a fable I read a long time ago, in the sense that its very fairytaleish. I don't think that's a word :$ . Anyways you have some nice work up here!

Anna N. Pedersen replies: "Thank you very muchly! I appriciate ( donnu how to spell it ) that you commented my stories! ^_^Anna ^_^"

What's with the danish writing up there? Are you Danish? I'm clueless so don't get mad at me if it says it somewhere in your bio.

Anna N. Pedersen replies: "Well, it says in my bio that I come from Denmark, but it's okay. Not everybody wants to read bios! ^_^ Anna ^_^"

Okay... I'll try to write this on English! I'LL TRY!!!

I haven't read your stories... Sorry! I don't think their bad! Not at all!!! I... I just think it's boring to read English... Sorry...

See ya!

WillowDK

Dear Anna,

I'm proud to be included in your list of favorite authors - and in such fine company too! I'm also impressed with your stories - you should definitely keep writing.

Best Wishes,

Lene

hey, you seem like a nice girl to me and wow that's awesome you live in denmark! that's so far away from Texas. you rock! even though i dont't really know you well i feel like i know you. anyway what do you draw. my cousin taryn is like really good drawings. not to brag or anything. well talk to you later!!!


~~~!@#$%^&**MIKIE**&^%$#@!~~~

Alright it's good considering your 13, but to be very blunt you rely too much on adverbs(which makes it sound forced after awhile) and you provide description where there shouldn't be. Like in the end of chapter one(i think) it says "She blinked with her eyes" Well of course she did because what else do you blink with?
It's a good start though. I hope this won't sound really mean or like I'm trashing you, which isn't my intent. I'd suggest picking up a copy of 'The Elements of Style' by William Strunk and E.B. White. It's a small, cheap book and I think you would benefit from it. Trust me, I did.

I read your stories and I think that they're wonderful. Your use of the English language is nothing short of perfect and the story lines are great! Keep writing! I wouldn't be surprised if you wind up writing novels for a living.

*sighs* The school system is obviously so much better in your side of the world (Denmark). I live in Florida, and the equivalent of 6th grade here would probably be 9th or 10th there. I really wish I had lived in Denmark while I was in school. I graduated two years ago at 16, but how hard is that when the work we do is so redundant? Bah... American schools suck.

Er meget imponeret!!!! virkelig spændene!!!
glæder mig allerede til næste hisorie.......du kunne godt ende som forfatter,i så fald ville jeg være en af de første til at læse dine bøger....

keep up the good work
"the roskildenser"