| 25 Aug 2006 |  Ariel E. Lewis | Hey, I saw you were lacking in comments on your main page (and I know how depressed it makes me when I come and nobody has written anything) so I thought I'd stop by and say HI! Thanks again for leaving comments on my stories...just to let you know, I submitted a new ticket with the beginning of chapter 3 (it's taken me forever, I know) and a couple of short stories. They should be up in a couple of days (meaning 3?...10?...a million?).
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| 22 Apr 2007 |  SkyDance | Hey...Read your short stories...They were interesting but was lacking the aaaaa how do i put this with out sounding like im being judge-mental??..Hummmmmmm...Ok i got it....You need to put more of yourself in to the stories so the storie will paint a pitcher in the readers head..And dont be afraid to use more imagination...Guess I'm not much help huh??.. Well don't give up ..Keep trying..You have a lot of heart..((((((((((HUGZ)))))))).. Good luck....  | |
