| 22 Sep 2004 |  Kasi L. Albert |  Loading...I didn't mean anything negative. I just find some of your phrasing a bit safe. I'd love to read some of your work that is a bit more free-formed. Read Frankenstein - very good and I think it would appeal to you.  Simon S. Pettersson replies: "Oh, you mean that. It's probably because of all the Shakespeare and Byron I've read. I tend to try and write like them, because they're the poets I admire the most. There's nothing I hate more than those hundreds and hundreds of poems that go:
"I wake up
In the night
And I kiss
The darkness
The pain is
Unbearable, and I
Walk through the woods
Of Sorrow"
It's as if people think that as long as you write unintelligable sentances using words like pain, darkness and sorrow, and you add some random line breaks every here and there, it's poetry." | |
| 27 Sep 2004 | Kasi L. Albert | Loading... *Laughing* Yes, I know what you mean! It reminds me of this site: http://www.deadlounge.com/poetry/created.html Anyway, I'll stop taking up all the room in your guestbook now! Simon S. Pettersson replies: "What an excellent page! I love it, thanks for showing it to me.And you don't have to stop hogging my guestbook. It makes me look poular!" | |
| 15 Oct 2004 |  Charlene 'The Amazing Bubble Girl' M. Mattson | Loading... Ooo, Eye Candy! *smiles sheepishly* Yees? I'll read the short story soon. Promise. Simon S. Pettersson replies: "Um... Yes?" | |
| 29 Jun 2005 |  Monkeyflower | Loading... God, i love poems ... *sigh*. most of mine arent in the right genre for elfwood (grr!) which is why i love reading other people's so much! yours are the best! they're very vivid and passionate  | |
| 18 Apr 2006 |  Brandy | Loading... *drools* ..... Over your writing... Yea that's it *thumbs up* *faints* | |
| 15 Sep 2006 | Mike | Loading... Umm... Love the poems! Love all the pics too bud, ;p | |
| 11 Feb 2008 | Enslaving Fools, Upon Carpets of Jewels | Loading... Some lovely work here. Look forward to seeing more. | |
| 9 Apr 2008 |  Jake Phoenix Beasley | Loading... You are a most interesting author with some powerful ideas. | |
| 1 Jan 2009 |  Jess L Rhapsodos | Loading... Really awesome writings. I know, I use that word a lot. Amazing, inspirational, and emotional could maybe be some better words to describe your poems.
Anyway, I really enjoyed your work. | |
| 3 Jun 2009 |  Alexandra mercy busch | Loading... fun. you’re really the first writer i’ve read on this site, dispite how long i’ve been on it. you’ve given me some ideas, i never really knew what they meant by fictional poems. stories, no problem, poems...i now have a better idea of how to word them. thank you. you’re are not bad at all by the way. | |
