| 13 Nov 2000 |  Amarantha | You really do paint a picture with your words, an extravagent development of concepts. Will you be creating a series? I'd like to see how you'd resolve a plot. | |
| 19 Nov 2000 |  Esther SP. Buhrman | Your poetry may be short, but the images and feelings they portray are deep and beautiful. 'Sweet Breeze' is my favourite! | |
| 23 Nov 2000 |  Brian M. Kempton | Great work....I look forward to seeing more from you.. | |
| 2 Dec 2000 | Madeline Jane Quirk | Ah, you have a lot of poems, lovely might I add... but they're over before I've even begun! There's nothing wrong with quick poems, they're direct and get the message across. It would be interesting though to read a longer poem by you to tell a story rather than just a message or thought. Combine the thoughts and you have a character =) Wa-la! | |
| 23 Dec 2000 |  Megan Larson | Thank you for the comments you left at my library. Your works are great... As you get older, do not give it up. If you can keep your mind within the realm of imagination and possibility, you can keep writing lovely poetry until you are a wrinkled old woman. | |
| 17 Jan 2001 | Harpreet K. Dhandal | I was so loaded with homework and assignments, so i decided a break...turns out I made the right choice, huh! Your poems are indeed thought-provoking, like My Shadow, and Sweet Breeze. I had a great time here, and i'll definitely be back soon! | |
| 26 Jan 2001 | The Author | Why thank you, thank you. The update didn't go through on Echoes of a fading past...put I will be sure to get it up. I also am definately putting all my thought and concentration to finishing my story, A picture paints a thousand words. In respose to the comment about the structure of one of my poems, thank you for giving me that feedback. I am incompentant at html, so it doesn't really show as I'd like it, but it was intended that way. My 'style' as some have put it. *S* Thank you all for commenting, please do return. Jessica | |
| 18 Oct 2001 |  Jessecca Collins | ~Glances at the previous comment~ Well for clarification, that's not me. Just came looking for updates seeing as I like your work so much. Not here yet though so..
I figured you would sign your name instead of a tag. There was no mistake.Updates got screwed up, but I'm fixing it. | |
| 3 Feb 2003 |  Jessecca Collins | Ah! What happened to my Aria story? ~Stares all pleading like~ ...Put it back. Even if it's revised, put it back. I love it and it's -mine.- I lost my copy when the computer got wiped out. At least send me a copy sometime... | |
