| 6 Apr 2003 | Iris Ayers | ur coloring is very nice ^.^ keep this up! cant wait to see more that ur going to post.. o.O ur gunna post more right?! RIGHT?!  Dawn Crystal Totten replies: "Yes I will be posting more when I have time. " | |
| 11 Aug 2003 | Katie ´Shaden´ Anderson | I like your ideas and the colours that you use. My only crit is some of your pictures are a little unclear, not defined enough. If you could make them clearer it would be much better. But otherwise I like your women and the long gowns they wear, they are beautiful. Keep up the work and well done! | |
| 23 Dec 2003 | Camilla M. Drakenborg | | |
| 9 Feb 2004 | ~Mizunderstood!~ | *looks around the room*..Well Hi.... | |
| 11 Jul 2004 | Amber 'The Amber Flame' Slayton | | |
| 31 Aug 2004 | Paul White | Wonderful !!!! You have an amazing talent. Thanks for sharing it with me !!  Dawn Crystal Totten replies: "Thank you" | |
| 8 Sep 2004 | Amber 'Greywolf' McGovern | Excellent works sweets ^.^ Your coloring is something to be proud of! And your clothing is fantastic..heh I cant draw clothing So i offer you a HUGE Kudo's!!! Thanks for visiting my site, i'm glad I came to visit yours..I will be checking on your work you can count on that ^.^  Dawn Crystal Totten replies: "Thank you, I love drawing clothes it's eyes and feet I hate" | |
| 1 Jun 2005 | Amy Woods | Wow. u stuff is really cool. i like your style alot and keep drawing!  Dawn Crystal Totten replies: "Thanks" | |
| 4 Aug 2005 | Trevor Mathis | You have a good grasp on character and outfit design. You need to work on line work and adding depth. I started adding depth by drawing geometric shapes then took that idea and applied it to creatures and characters and I always try to improve on what I do. You have great ideas and I think that adding depth to the drawings will amplify your skill.  Dawn Crystal Totten replies: "Thank you for the input. I agree with adding the depth." | |
| 15 Jun 2007 | Max kutschenreuter | Hey, nice drawings, you got good skill with colouring and coloured shading, great. though i got some tips: in some drawing look a bit better to the faces, eyes etc. and look a bit better to some anatomy muscle and bone structure. but further you have it all down, i love your hairs, and your concepts and you got some original ideas ^^ and lovely clothes ^^ keep it up and keep practising  | |